fic for mystxdeathangel

Jul 03, 2008 21:01

Title: Pretty Good Looking
Rating: NC-17
Threesome: Jin/Kame/Ueda
Summary: Jin goes to a club bar and gets drunk tipsy.

Pretty Good Looking )

jin/kame/ueda, !rating: nc-17

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anamuan July 4 2008, 08:04:16 UTC
this is promising to bring the hot and then you pull this out: Or, at least, Jin hoped that it was; it would be a really awful disappointment if Ueda had gone to the trouble of handcuffing Jin to his bed just because he and Kame wanted to have a serious talk with him and didn't want to risk him running away or sticking his fingers in his ears and singing, "Lalala, I can't hear you."
i literally burst out laughing. i was afraid i'd wake my roommate up.

it definitely brought the hot, btw. though i'm sure you realize that already.

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jain October 27 2008, 03:48:11 UTC
My apologies for the late reply. I'm so glad you enjoyed that bit; it was one of my favorites to write, perhaps because I like teasing Jin a little too much in fic. :-) Thanks so much for the lovely comment!

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rindiggfelt July 4 2008, 15:39:20 UTC
Really really hot. And the last part about Jin feeling uneasy when he saw Ueda and Kame cuddling, and then Kame lacing his fingers with Jin's made me all sorts of flaily and happy *______*

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jain October 27 2008, 03:46:03 UTC
My apologies for the late reply, and thanks so much for the comment! I did want to indicate at the end that there was some hope for the three of them of working things out amongst themselves in a way that doesn't leave anyone heartbroken, and I'm so glad that that worked for you.

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ky_rin July 6 2008, 23:28:07 UTC
asl;dkjas;lkdj I only recently realized my not-so-secret kink for Kame/Ueda as girls and getting it on after their performance of SHOT on SCP, and this fic is just guh all sorts of awesome and hot *___* I also really like the take on Jin/Ueda! Awkward Akame :3

Jin looked down at Ueda with a fair amount of apprehension--not to say terror--and Kame took one look at the expression on his face and burst into laughter.
I fell off my chair in glee -- you leave me wanting laksjhdlkjh hot.

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jain October 27 2008, 03:43:41 UTC
Sorry for this late reply, and thanks very much for your lovely comment. I think one of the best things about Jin/Kame is how they know each other so well in some ways and not at all in others, so that they're close, but constantly negotiating emotional minefields, as well.

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kieta_seraphim July 7 2008, 15:30:23 UTC
I was squeeling all the way through reading this~ I absolutely adored it~!

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jain October 27 2008, 03:40:18 UTC
Sorry it took me so long to reply to your comment. I'm very glad you enjoyed the story, and thank you for the lovely prompt. This was really a lot of fun to write.

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ryogrande July 8 2008, 04:36:07 UTC
KAMEDA AS GIRLS HOLY SHIT. i like the way jin thinks.

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jain October 27 2008, 03:38:23 UTC
Sorry for the terribly late reply. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. Jin might not be the sharpest tool in the box in a lot of ways, but he does have good ideas on occasion. :-)

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