fic for maya_morning
Title: Letters From the Shore
Rating: NC-17
Threesome: Yamapi/Kame/Koki
Summary: Rather unexpectedly, Kazuya finds himself on epic journey for America. He's convinced you can't drive to America, but that doesn't stop anyone. (Maybe he just didn't get the memo.)
Notes: I hope you like this. ♥ And I'm sorry it turned out rather, er, longer than I ( Read more... )
Rating: NC-17
Threesome: Yamapi/Kame/Koki
Summary: Rather unexpectedly, Kazuya finds himself on epic journey for America. He's convinced you can't drive to America, but that doesn't stop anyone. (Maybe he just didn't get the memo.)
Notes: I hope you like this. ♥ And I'm sorry it turned out rather, er, longer than I ( Read more... )
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kamnsj first, I love that you have Kame waking up in a car with two strangers, that he's as lost as we are, that he has no idea where he is or who he's with. I absolutely adore your characterisation. I love that Yamapi is snarky and bitchy, that Koki is trying to write a
piano rap, that you hint at Kokame's relationship here (especially with this line, The boy beamed, leaning forward into Kazuya's arms, just a second too long and inch too close, until Kazuya stumbled backwards himself) but you don't explicitly tell us that Koki has feelings for Kame and Kame feels something a little bit more than friendship.
I love the humour in this. There are seriously so many parts that made me laugh out loud, in particular this one, He learned the boy's name a few hours after he found out that he wore fluorescent pink underwear. His name was Koki ( ... )
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Kazuya stared. 'Why?'
Yamapi shrugged. 'It promotes liking each other or something.'
'... And we liked each other, right?'
'We're going to America together,' was all Yamapi answered to that. And it's so Kame to obsess and worry about where he stands with Yamapi but for Yamapi it's so easy-they're going to America together, so of course they like one another.
THE SEX!!!!! It was hilarious and hot and just jasnjs beautiful. I seriously loved that they were having sex but you kept them IC, particularly Yamapi who made me snicker with the line 'You're ignoring me,' Yamapi interrupted petulantly. Yamapi didn't much like being ignored, especially if there was sex involved. Sex was so much more fun if people actually paid attention to you.The ( ... )
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Thank you for your comment, it warmed my heart. and made me smile like an idiot. :D♥
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I love the whole concept of it, the way you wrote it and the characters' interactions.I absolutely love their conversations.
The whole journey seems methaphorical and it always hints of some deeper meaning, but the readers are left to figure it out themselves.
I love this a lot, it's my fav in this fic exchange so far. Thank You!
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Although this is, I think, the most impressive thing I've ever written, I hope you will find something enjoyable to read among my other fics once reveals go up. :D
The whole journey seems methaphorical and it always hints of some deeper meaning, but the readers are left to figure it out themselves.
True! It is meant to be methaporical. ♥
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OH MY GOD, JUST HAVE MY FLAILING. JUST OH MY GOD :O
I am left absolutely stunned at the end of the story. I feel so incredibly moved by it all, the snark, the references, oh, gosh. Your imagination, their interactions. I love this threesome, yes, THERE IS NO ANGST YES -- AND THERE IS JIN AT THE END, OH MY GOD. WHY IS LIFE SO BEAUTIFUL.
I would agree with ayuzak about how metaphorical it has come to be. It's almost AU but not really because it is grounded just so, and. I could just keep flailing at you.
Junno made me fall over in my chair, Ueda looking at his gold watch, Koki accusing them of stealing his music a;slkda;sldkj I have so many favourite snippets of this ♥________♥!!!
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