Title: Evidence of Things Not Seen
Genre: Romance, Drama
Pairing: Luna/Cedric
Rating: PG
Summary: Cedric Diggory has some very unusual assistance during the Triwizard Tournament. A series of vignettes.
Disclaimer: Harry Potter is the creation of JKR.
Authors Note: See end of entry.
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I like your Cedric... he's kind, and in character. I loved the chess scene, and I also like that you ended the story two weeks before the third task... the "oh, no, I know what's coming" is certainly there, but it doesn't overpower the story. Which is perfect, because this story is about the friendship-turning-to-something-more between Cedric and Luna, and that's exactly where your focus stays.
I hope you write more!
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