Title: Evidence of Things Not Seen
Genre: Romance, Drama
Pairing: Luna/Cedric
Rating: PG
Summary: Cedric Diggory has some very unusual assistance during the Triwizard Tournament. A series of vignettes.
Disclaimer: Harry Potter is the creation of JKR.
Authors Note. Reviews of all stripes are welcome, including concrit. Thanks to Bookofsecrets and
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"Off to read 1 and 2"
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You do a good job of giving your characters dignity and having them respond as a person, rather than a plot device, might.
Cho, for instance, if written by another might have had an emotional outburst followed by her stalking Cedric’s every move. Upon finding out Cedric and Luna’s growing friendship Cho would immediately plot to destroy said relationship. You now have Cho as the villain who would have been pushing the plot for the remainder of the story.
I sincerely appreciate that you didn’t do that. You gave her dignity in her loss and had Cedric feel genuinely bad about it.
I’m not quite sure how he would have been able to get Firewhiskey. Is it because of the lower age limit in the UK ?
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As for Cho, YES! Nothing gets me to press the back button faster than villifying a character for the sake of a plot. It's the mark of a hack. I have a particular soft spot for Cho, who is bashed by Harry shippers of every stripe for daring to be the hero's first kiss.
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