Comments | jtav: Evidence of Things Not Seen 2/4 (Luna/Cedric, PG)

jtav

Evidence of Things Not Seen 2/4 (Luna/Cedric, PG)

Oct 26, 2008 14:19

Title: Evidence of Things Not Seen
Genre: Romance, Drama
Pairing: Luna/Cedric
Rating: PG
Summary: Cedric Diggory has some very unusual assistance during the Triwizard Tournament. A series of vignettes.
Disclaimer: Harry Potter is the creation of JKR.
Authors Note. Reviews of all stripes are welcome, including concrit. Thanks to Bookofsecrets and ( Read more... )

characters: cedric diggory, fic, cedric/luna, evidence of things not seen, characters: luna lovegood, harry potter

Comments 12

darkmagic_luvr October 26 2008, 19:47:49 UTC

fantastical. Really liked this. Keep up the good work!

jtav October 26 2008, 19:52:21 UTC

Thank you.

serendipity_50 October 26 2008, 22:41:14 UTC

LOL!LOL!LOL!

"Yes. There's been a sighting of a new variety of vampire in the American Northwest. They sparkle in the sunlight."

I'm STILL laughing at that line!

Great story. Great characterization. Great job!!

jtav October 27 2008, 00:07:38 UTC

Thanks. What's a Cedric fic without a Twilight reference? It seemed a natural fit with the Quibbler.

serendipity_50 October 27 2008, 00:17:13 UTC

Absolutely!!

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jtav October 27 2008, 11:28:41 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed it. I think build-up is the most important part of a romance, especially for a rare pairing like this one. It's a lot more fun to write, too. There's only so many ways to write a kiss or sex scene, so how they got to that point is the interesting part.

This is the only Cullen reference in the whole fic, I promise :) I needed a funny Quibbler story, and that seemed the obvious way to go.

shiiki October 27 2008, 10:56:18 UTC

Nice work on continuing this! I liked Cedric's observations of Luna very much. The idea that Cho Chang wasn't Cedric's first choice is also an interesting one, and I quite like how you pulled it off here.

And sparkling vampires! LOL!

Looking forward to the next instalment!

jtav October 27 2008, 11:43:28 UTC

Thanks. Since Cedric's interest in Cho is platonic in this fic, he had to have a motive other than attraction for asking her out. If poor Harry had only known, I'm sure he'd be more envious of Cedric than he already was.

phil_urich October 28 2008, 01:28:16 UTC

wow, I think I mentioned this with your last piece, but you are doing an excellent job of weaving your story into that portion of Goblet of Fire between the first and second trial. Every part of it seems to be well balanced and your Luna and Cedric are just wonderful. Cedric isn't just a nice guy stereotype. He's Cedric. Luna is more than just an odd girl. She's a third year girl who is lonesome, but also refuses to compromise herself for the sake of a few "friends."

jtav October 31 2008, 18:02:08 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad you think I got their charactertization right.