The Very Thought of You

Apr 11, 2011 14:21

How time flies when you're not having fun. I've been just swamped but have been saving this to post. Going back a couple of months from my previous story--to when Ralph talks Laurie into doing something he doesn't want to do. This is based on characters in Mary Renault's The Charioteer. They belong to her and I make no profit from them.

The Very Thought of YOu )

male, the charioteer, m/m, free, slash, laurie, gay, mary renault, ralph

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addie71 April 11 2011, 23:24:11 UTC
Ah, this is so lovely and sweet. Just the way I like my Ralph & Laurie.

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jrtomlin April 11 2011, 23:38:02 UTC
Thanks. :)

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greenlady2 April 12 2011, 01:20:41 UTC
This is sweet. I love it when Ralph gets a bit grumpy with Laurie and then goes all romantic. :-)

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jrtomlin April 12 2011, 16:23:56 UTC
Hehe I imagine them squabbling at times the way any couple will. It does make me laugh.

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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dramadream10 April 12 2011, 20:35:23 UTC
This was so sweet. Ralph being romantic is always a treat. Once again I must praise you for your song choice. I love the song "The Very Thought of You." and it fits so well into the backdrop of the story.
"Ralph had always suspected it was Spud's eyes that had made him fall in love with him, but he never mentioned that." Brilliant!

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jrtomlin April 12 2011, 22:28:23 UTC
Thanks. :)

I thought that one was perfect.

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weqimiri April 13 2011, 23:47:43 UTC
Plain and simple! I like your work!

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jrtomlin April 13 2011, 23:51:28 UTC
Why thank you. :)

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Miss your awesome shorts! dramadream10 July 23 2011, 00:51:13 UTC
Hope your having an awesome summer. I'm just greedy enough to see if you have anything new in store? Love all your shorts and Freedom's Sword was a total delight! Hope to read more in the future!

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Re: Miss your awesome shorts! jrtomlin July 23 2011, 00:58:45 UTC
Thank you! I really appreciate you saying that. Well, both. I'm glad you like my shorts and that you enjoyed Freedom's Sword. :)

As a matter of fact I'm working on something new that I'll post soon.

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Re: Miss your awesome shorts! dramadream10 July 24 2011, 22:39:29 UTC
yayayayayay

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Re: Miss your awesome shorts! jrtomlin August 27 2011, 21:16:13 UTC
Well, soon may have been overly optimistic. ;)

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