Comments | jrosemary: Changing Teams, Epilogue

jrosemary

Changing Teams, Epilogue

Jan 20, 2010 13:00

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adult discipline, slash, white collar, peter-neal, fan fiction, pre-slash

Comments 17

daria234 January 20 2010, 20:06:02 UTC

This fic is just too amazing. I love that Peter is the last to know, and that Mozzie and El are the first to know. I love that they've both been letting the subtext lie even though they both know it was there. And I love Peter thinking through all the consent issues. And Elizabeth was too cool for words. This was just so incredibly sweet but with some really great sexy 'ownership' stuff.

jrosemary January 20 2010, 21:30:02 UTC

Thanks so much!

I've been wanting to do a Peter/Neal fic that dealt with the consent issues. And Peter's still not convinced this is a great idea--largely because of said consent issues. I may revisit this storyline with a sequel to explore that further.

Meanwhile, I'm a sucker for the 'ownership' angle!

asimaiyat January 21 2010, 05:11:09 UTC

squeeeeeeeee.

Your Peter is so cute and worried and responsible -- and luckily outnumbered. :D I love that they made a schedule! So many adorable details -- Satchmo sleeping with Neal, arguing over Dragon Age, Neal eavesdropping on Mom and Dad fighting... And of course, yay spanking. Mmmmmm.

Well played, bb. Well played.

jrosemary January 21 2010, 06:47:55 UTC

Thanks so much! Yeah, Peter found himself ganged up on. That's ok--it was for his own good. And--lol!-yeah, I guess Neal was eavesdropping on 'Mom and Dad.'

Meanwhile, I'm sure Neal will make sure there's more spanking in the future. :P

darkhavens January 21 2010, 15:33:31 UTC

All that delicious subtext put to good use at last. *g* Loved it. :D

jrosemary January 23 2010, 23:58:01 UTC

Thanks so much! Subtext is good, lol. :)

euphonious_glow January 22 2010, 02:20:44 UTC

I really liked this. The dialogue was cute and perfect, and scenes of Burke/Caffrey domestic life always make me smile. Nice job with the characterization. =)

jrosemary January 23 2010, 23:58:59 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm a sucker for Burke/Caffrey domestic scenes. (As well as for the ownership issue mentioned above, lol.)

:)

angstie January 27 2010, 04:37:30 UTC

GUH!! I absolutely adored this!! White Collar is my new fandom and Peter/Neal/Elizabeth is my new kink LOL

Going to read more of your fics while I wait for today's ep to download :)

Ang

jrosemary January 27 2010, 05:36:03 UTC

Aw, thanks so much! I hope you enjoy the other fics too. :)

~Rose