Gift fic for bokehshot

Dec 21, 2010 15:48

For: bokehshot
From: Naughty Reindeer

Title: Denying the causal nexus.
Pairings/Characters: Aoi/Uruha
Rating: PG
Warnings: None
Notes: Turned out to be more reflective, but I hope you like it.
Summary: Music has been said to be the language of the soul, a means of connection that transcends everything else. Uruha was never good in communication, and so was ( Read more... )

p: aoi/uruha, year: 2010, band: the gazette, rated: pg

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kurenai_tenshi December 22 2010, 06:45:12 UTC
Wow. It's so beautiful & perfect! Kinda sad, but it's still a beauty. I love it so much!

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gratiela December 23 2010, 11:57:42 UTC
<333 Beautiful! Thank you for writing!!

A very delicate insight over a person's life in general, a musician's in particular- it made me connect in many ways!<3

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quarrions December 24 2010, 14:29:29 UTC
wow the ending line ..just wow
I loved it

I liked how this wasn´t really plot oriented but rather some kind of contemplating over various facts of one´s life

very very nice

thank you for writing this <3

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anonymous December 31 2010, 12:14:33 UTC
“Just let me... sleep on the floor,” the younger slurred out, “Don’t want to bother you...”

Aoi could only roll his eyes at that, struggling with each time Uruha’s legs gave out. “You’re already bothering me.”

HAHAHAHHAHAA! AWESOME!

He was already falling asleep but the sudden weight over his thighs pulled him back to wakefulness. Groaning, Aoi looked down to find a slender leg haphazardly thrown over both of his.

:)))))))) I'm having like THIS awesome picture in my head right now C:

This was nice and calming. I didn't really expected the ending, that's true, but it was good. I think you could have balanced the author's parts to the actions part differently. There are too much explanations done in words by the author than the examples where we simply SEE what you wants us to know about them and about Aoi, or Uruha.

I haven't read Aoi/Uruha in quite a while so THANK YOU for giving me a chance to read them again <3

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cateris January 1 2011, 14:39:31 UTC
This was cateris commenting here.

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