Four LOST drabbles.

Jun 04, 2009 00:47

OKAY, monumental moment here. I've been playing around with some LOST fanfiction lately, so I decided I'd test the waters. Baby steps. I'm a tad nervous since this is the first time I've ever posted anything I've written anywhere and I'm still new to fanfiction. These aren't anything to get excited over. (How excited can you get over 100 words?) But I'm proud of them nonetheless, so there.

They're each exactly 100 words because I just wanted to see if I could do it. It's harder than you might think. Oh, and I apologize for the crappy titles. I don't have much to work with here. D:

Title: Buried
Characters: Juliet, ensemble
Rating: PG
Spoilers: Through "The Incident"

She watches them from the jungle as they stand around a heap of fresh soil. Her funeral. She almost smiles.

James doesn't move, doesn't blink, doesn't even appear to be breathing. Jack's eyes are red, his lips are moving but she doesn't hear what he's saying. Sayid leans against Hurley for support. Kate tries not to look at James while Jin puts a hand on his friend's shoulder.

It takes her a while to realize that Miles is looking right at her. Their eyes meet for a second before he sighs and looks away. Get the hell out of here.

Title: Fate
Characters: Jacob, Richard, and a couple of guests, but I'll see if anyone can guess who they are. (One is totally obvious.) ;D
Rating: PG
Spoilers: None, really, since this is entirely speculative

There are only three survivors.

Jacob studies them as they shift in their seats, taking in their new surroundings. The captain adjusts his eye-patch and waits for someone to explain how his ship ended up in the middle of the jungle. The slave keeps rubbing her wrists, thankful to have been spared one fate but unsure what awaits her.

It's the boy that interests Jacob. He sees the future - his, the Island's - in those dark eyes. He approaches him calmly, kneels in front of him and asks, "What is your name?"

He looks Jacob in the eye without fear. "Ricardos."

Title: Desperate
Characters: Miles, Daniel
Rating: PG
Spoilers: Through "This Place is Death"

Miles knows it won't work. But Dan's face is so damn pitiful when he pleads Will you at least try? that he gives in.

Dan drags him to the spot where she died. He honestly does try, hoping that he'll actually be able to talk to her and she'll say whatever it is that Daniel wants to hear.

Nothing.

He could lie - he's done it plenty of times before. But Dan is watching him with desperate eyes and he just can't. He gets up and leaves him sitting there alone, swallowing down the lump in his throat. "I'm sorry, Dan."

Title: Burn
Characters: Ben
Rating: PG
Spoilers: Through "The Incident"

He sits quietly and watches him burn.

He half-notices that John is watching too. No - not John. Whoever he is. Ben doesn't really care anymore. He just keeps staring as the fire consumes flesh and bone, Jacob's words ringing in his ears.

What about you?

Memories dance across his mind - his first meeting with Richard, Charles, Juliet telling him he has cancer, the plane crash, John, Alex's blood on his hands. After everything, Jacob still shunned him.

But it doesn't matter now, he thinks, and smiles as the flames pop and the bones turn to ash. Good riddance, Jacob.

PLEASE BE GENTLE. And thank you for reading. ♥

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