Fic: This Horizon Line

Sep 20, 2007 17:10

Fandom: My Chemical Romance
Pairing: Frank/Gerard
Size: 2000 words
Notes: AU, loosely connected maybe, if you like, to A Common Understanding. Or perhaps an AU of an AU.

but nobody cares )

my fic, my fic-mcr

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elle_dritch September 20 2007, 21:51:50 UTC
You have broken my goddamn heart. Oh, Frankie, you hopeless romantic. Oh, Gerard, you crazy fool.

I'm not sniffling. I just- I've got something in my eye.

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joyfulseeker September 21 2007, 13:47:32 UTC
Awww, I'm sorry! I didn't (quite) mean to. Those pesky eye-cinders! They can be quite bothersome.

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miznarrator September 20 2007, 21:52:36 UTC
Oh my heart.

Frank.

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joyfulseeker September 21 2007, 13:48:04 UTC
Thank you!

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joyfulseeker September 21 2007, 13:50:21 UTC
Thank you so much! You definitely picked one of my favorite parts, or, at least, the part that I messaged quettaser about and said, "OH MY GOD I JUST GOT TO WRITE THE MOST CLICHED THING EVERRRRRRRR."

Good times, yup. I just, what I love about Frank is that you can absolutely make him say something like that, absolutely, which is a lot of fun.

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giddygeek September 21 2007, 01:26:53 UTC
Oh, oh, so sweet and sad!

"That wasn't so crazy," he whispered, and Gerard smiled so that Frank could feel it everywhere they were touching.

"I wanted to do that," Gerard said.

"I like that you did that," Frank said,

I love that moment SO much! Gorgeous. Thank you for sharing, even if it did break my heart a little. ;-)

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joyfulseeker September 21 2007, 13:52:28 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it! That was my other favorite part, when I was rereading on one of my bouts of "oh lord what happens next why am I writing this story?" so I'm glad it worked for you as well!

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joyfulseeker September 21 2007, 14:29:39 UTC
Oh, you know, that's a really interesting point, and one that I hadn't thought about, because I am by default reading from the perspective of knowing how it ends. I'm so glad that both ways worked, gosh! Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it. At one point, I was like, YES, ADDING TO THE STORE OF AMBIGUOUSLY UNHAPPY MCR STORIES, YES!

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