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anonymous May 20 2014, 00:04:34 UTC
Ack. This is witchwife. My phone won't let me sign on to LJ for whatever reason. Really enjoyed this! Curious where the meme part is. (In no way meant as a criticism, I'm genuinely interested and get that the prompt can be taken as a jumping off point.)

I think the dialogue in this was especially well done. It really brought to mind a comic book - could practically see the speech bubbles!

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joyfulfeather May 20 2014, 00:11:42 UTC
Thank you! :D

The meme part is the viral video! I was worried that wouldn't be an obvious connection.

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witchwife May 20 2014, 04:39:04 UTC
Oh! No. That makes perfect sense. I just wasn't thinking, apparently.

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solstice_singer May 20 2014, 02:29:51 UTC
I hope they figure it out. I don't want to see the people who framed her get away with it.

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joyfulfeather May 21 2014, 03:59:25 UTC
Thank you! They'll totally figure it out. Justice must prevail!

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kagomeshuko May 20 2014, 03:00:58 UTC
Interesting take on the topic and I got the meme was the viral video.

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joyfulfeather May 21 2014, 03:59:34 UTC
Thanks!

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roina_arwen May 20 2014, 06:08:00 UTC
Nicely done, and very realistic characters.

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joyfulfeather May 21 2014, 03:59:46 UTC
Thank you!

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lrig_rorrim May 20 2014, 17:27:20 UTC
Though I'm familiar with your Raven stories, this really does stand on its own brilliantly. The characters and their concerns come through loud and clear. This a really, really good take on the prompt and a great story!

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joyfulfeather May 21 2014, 03:59:58 UTC
Thank you so much! :D

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