The Trouble with Love Chapter 20

[joyblue]

Auhor: Joy Blue
Title: The Trouble with Love 20/22
Rating: R
Summary: Because sometimes, not all scars can heal with time.
Spoilers: Up to season 9 is fair game
Standard Disclaimers Apply
Warning: Violence, adult situation in future chapters.
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Raymond coughed up more blood as a steel bar was slammed against his chest

Comments

[pompeypearly_v2]

MORE!!

That was bloody fantastic!!

Are we going to find out what Lex's plans for Chloe were?

[joyblue]

thank you! there will be more... and yes... but
not now!

[alexis374]

duuuuuuude - i am soo in love with fic i just don't know what to do with myself! good job! and snaps for being able to write action sequences well, because i could totally see that all happen. oh, and i loved that motorbike Bond scene, so happy to see another version of it :D really looking forward to the next chapter!

[joyblue]

thanks!! the action sequences were
a bit of a pain to write, and I'm glad
you liked the Bond bike scene, I watched that
scene and was like 'woah! love it!'

[you82it]

Wow! So intriguing, Love the action =)

[joyblue]

Thank you! and thank you for your previous comments,
haven't had the chance to reply yet. Hope you enjoy
the next chapters!

[kitmerlot1213]

That was damn exciting!

"Kitmerlot1213, you get a prize for thinking about Raymond Wong and a different serum" You are too kind but I always love the mysterious characters who may or may not be evil :) So good work creating him in the first place.

So I am very proud of Dr. Wong for having a secret plan all along, and for foiling Lex's evil plan. He died a hero.

And how cool that Oliver will still have the strength and increased senses without the horrible side affects. That will definitely help him and Chloe survive that fall into the water.

Excellent work on that action sequence by the way :)

I know that he is evil in this fic, but my little Chlexer heart wants to believe that Lex doesn't want Chloe hurt because there is a part of him that still cares for her :):)

Continued excellent work on this fic :)

[joyblue]

Thank you! And yes, that increased strength is
going to come in handy! And Chlex... oh well...

[slytherinpunk]

Wow! What a fantastic chapter! I really loved that you had Dr. Wong messed with the formula instead of having Chloe's abilities return and heal Oliver. Great judgment call. Amazing chapter, such climactic action scenes! I am sad to see this end, but dying to know how you can wrap up all the emotions between Chloe and Oliver in the next two chapters. I hope you update soon!

[kryptolori]

OMG I never saw your comment before i posted so I'm kinda freaked we started the same way lol

[slytherinpunk]

Lol--well you know what they say about great minds... ;)

[joyblue]

Thank you! I was tossing between Wong and Chloe's powers,
but I just went for Wong instead. There's more Chlollie emotions
next chapter!