The Trouble with Love Chapter 17 2/2

Jul 06, 2010 22:28

-TBC-

And that’s all for tonight, the good news is, there’s going to be heaps, heaps more of
Chloe and Oliver now that I got this chapter out of the way!

chloe, george dean, the trouble with love, connor, oliver, rating: r

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renka23 July 6 2010, 13:55:40 UTC
I completely agree with everything you said, Cara. :))

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joyblue July 7 2010, 13:26:41 UTC
@Cara: Ouch! hehehe! Give Oliver a chance ;)
Will try to get the next one up next week!
@Renka: please give Ollie a chance!

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kitmerlot1213 July 6 2010, 13:00:18 UTC
Oh my GOD, but Oliver is completely out of control!

He's turned on everybody--I don't know which was worse, pulling the green K on Clark, grabbing Chloe's wrist as hard as he did or grabbing Connor as hard as he did.

Good for George and Lois for trying to help but Oliver would have hurt them too.

And now he's driven his car into the ocean--I just hope Connor's okay and Emil can help Oliver.

Continued awesome work on this story :)

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joyblue July 7 2010, 13:27:29 UTC
Thank you, and hopefully I can continue to
build the suspense in the next chapters!

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slytherinpunk July 6 2010, 13:34:18 UTC
That dinner was a disaster, lol.
I really enjoyed this chapter and look forward to seeing how Chlollie and Conner and Ollie can recover from this, because Oliver's words and insecurities have definitely done some damage.

Can't wait for another update!--For more Chlollie!

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joyblue July 7 2010, 13:28:01 UTC
The dinner wasn't as Lois had planned :)
Thank you, and more Chlollie!

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anonymous July 6 2010, 13:41:13 UTC
OMG OMG OMG!!! I'm having an heart attack!!!
wow!!! This chapter is... is wow!!!
can't wait for next!!!!!!

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joyblue July 7 2010, 13:30:30 UTC
Thanks for the wow! I'll try not to keep
you waiting too long!

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renka23 July 6 2010, 13:58:05 UTC
I really have no idea how in the world Oliver can still pull himself up from such predicament. I feel not even a slight sympathy for him. I'm sorry but the Chloe here seems like she'll be so much better off with George. :D
Great update, by the way! :)

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joyblue July 7 2010, 13:31:05 UTC
Thanks you! and hope that Oliver would
be better received in the next chapters!

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