Comments | joulezfics: Fandom: Suits. Title: Someone Cares.

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Fandom: Suits. Title: Someone Cares.

Aug 01, 2011 20:48

Title: Someone Cares.
Rating: PG13
Pairing: Mike/Trevor, Mike/Harvey
Summary: Spoilers for 1.05. Mike has a tough evening when all he wants to do is forget.
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Beta: None.
Author's Notes: This is set a month after 1.05, but before 1.06. I took liberty to assume episodes are set a month apart for the purpose of this fic.

( Mike was sat fiddling with the phone, turning it this way and that dropping it on more than one occasion, it had rang twice just that morning )

one shot, fandom: suits, complete, rating: pg-13

Comments 11

emmajane14 August 1 2011, 20:16:03 UTC

I love this little step into Mike's head. I really like the uplifting feeling of the end.

Just one tiny thing...you wrote " It was that stare the one that could make him anything and there were some things he just wasn't ready to say yet." but I think you're missing the word say before the word anything... just a friendly heads up! :)

joulez217 August 1 2011, 20:25:21 UTC

Glad you enjoyed it.

Ah thank you, I did re-read this twice but I still manage to miss something! I'll correct that now, thank you. :)

emmajane14 August 1 2011, 21:29:31 UTC

Not a problem! :)

brainzz_insanee August 1 2011, 20:50:37 UTC

Oh, this was cool :) I like this!

joulez217 August 1 2011, 20:53:00 UTC

Thank you, glad you enjoyed reading it! :)

ladyknightanka August 1 2011, 23:07:59 UTC

This is a beautiful, melancholy little piece. I love the contrast drawn between Harvey and Trevor. ♥

joulez217 August 2 2011, 08:22:21 UTC

Am glad you liked it and thank you for the comment. :)

seektheinfinite August 2 2011, 09:42:27 UTC

This was a perfect little piece, and although Harvey didn't actually say anything he was so perfectly in character. The fact that he'd send his driver to get Mike rather than doing it himself is just so Harvey! Thank you for this

joulez217 August 2 2011, 10:15:42 UTC

Wow okay thank you very, very much for the comment. :) And I have to see I definitley see Harvey as more of the actions speak louder than words kinda guys. But again thank you for the comment. :)

hucknclem August 3 2011, 04:03:39 UTC

This was really sweet; I love how you captured all the character nuances so perfectly. Thanks for the read! :)

joulez217 August 3 2011, 21:04:49 UTC

Thank you for the comment and am glad you think so, am never sometimes sure if people sound IC to be honest. So thank you very much. :)