I really enjoyed the story. You were able to utilize all the characters and keep their natures intact. Illyria and Jane...classic. I really liked that you brought Doyle in at the end, and Cordelia. I was sad when Doyle died. He was a neat character. I'm glad you explained the "how". If you'd left it up to random providence, it would have weakened the story.
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I really enjoyed the story. You were able to utilize all the characters and keep their natures intact. Illyria and Jane...classic. I really liked that you brought Doyle in at the end, and Cordelia. I was sad when Doyle died. He was a neat character. I'm glad you explained the "how". If you'd left it up to random providence, it would have weakened the story.
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