I've Complicated Our Lives by Falling in Love with Him 01

Mar 12, 2010 00:41


i've complicated our lives by falling in love with him.


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i've complicated our lives, fanfiction

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howlsgirl March 12 2010, 06:30:02 UTC
Is there going to be more? pleasepleaseplease

So, Min is a ghost and he was her lover? Right? lol! I really like the premise here that Min is real, but not. I'm not sure if that makes sense, but the way you went in for this fic. It's super neat!

I hope there is more!

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jossiebabyahh March 12 2010, 06:35:43 UTC
theres more.
i'm writing the smut scene right now (i'm becoming a pervert. -_-)
i'm actually editing the seconds part of this short story. i'm so intrigued by Jaejoong, i'm writing too much. lol

it's a good story isnt it?

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clarice99 March 12 2010, 18:52:44 UTC
This is very good. I really like the interplay of characters and how creatively you put them together. Just with the words, you can really feel the genuine sadness of Georgiana on Changmin and how Jae's starting to grow on her.

I'm going to read the second part now. But just so you know when I read "You don't play anymore," my heart skipped a beat and when I read "I used to listen to you play. It made my day" I squealed in front of the computer like a true fangirl even if I try not to. :)

Keep Jae Joong coming. I think he's a gold mine in terms of trying to look at him in different angles as a writer especially since he has so many sides to him. And it also doesn't hurt that I'm Jae-biased forever. :)

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jossiebabyahh March 13 2010, 02:24:04 UTC
forever is an awfuly long time.
but jaejoong will always be pretty.
hes so easy to write about and his aura pleases me very much.
i hope you liked this as much i liked writing it.
i have to finish the 3rd part now.
-_-

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gacktprince2008 March 12 2010, 20:45:00 UTC
oh changmin is a ghoat and jaejoong knows changmin's girlfriend all of the sudden. wonder what will happen?

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jossiebabyahh March 13 2010, 02:22:06 UTC
it's a secret!
-_-
nope. the second part is up now.
jaejoong smut baby.

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Narnia anonymous March 13 2010, 05:54:40 UTC
Jossie, this is excellent.
It's interesting to see you develop your writing. It is so full and layered.
Your characters are enticing, and I want to see what they are going to say, do, or think next.
Write more baby!

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Re: Narnia jossiebabyahh March 13 2010, 05:56:56 UTC
ahhhhh SHAINA LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE.

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