A Letter to Pegasus by Josika (part 2)

[josika]

This is second part. I must warn you - I did it just for fun. I haven't beta for this one, there will be a lot of mistakes and I really can't emulate McKay's style of talking in English. Sorry about it. But it was so cool idea. And I also wasn't able to deal with sad ending of previous one.
So, please, tell me about all grammatical errors.
Some

Comments

[lenyia]

This is so Rodney :) Really nice sequel.

[josika]

Thank you! And thank you for visit

[lenyia]

You're welcome. I like your writing so I must be everywhere :D

[josika]

It means, that if I start with McShep slash, you stay?

[anonymous]

Why you didn´t tell me that you have second part already? Uraženík. But it was exactly what I needed to read in between trying to translate this terrible texts... Well, enough of complaining... Thanks and so on