OMG! This was amazing. I was really loving it, and then when Pete showed up, and then Lionel, I was very disappointed. I decided to trust you and keep reading, though. Boy, am I glad I did. I love Lex's epiphany, then taking the snacks and himself to Clark's loft. What an great ending. My little fangirl heart was fluttering when you described Lex as having rested his head on Clark's shoulder, and Clark looking down on him.
Then, Clark kissed Lex's forehead! I think I swooned. Even more when Clark slide his big hand to Lex's lower back.
This was wonderfully descriptive and evocative - Lex felt that odd warmth in his belly flow outwards to make his limbs feel a little heavy and slow. Tension he hadn't realized he felt just drained out of him. He slid his other hand up to cradle Clark's head and god, this felt so good. It wasn't burning passion, or anything else he was used to, but Lex was finding it absolutely addictive and he never wanted to st--It's too bad Bo Kent showed up, but just as well. Wouldn't want things getting
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*lol* Sorry to disappoint in the beginning -- I'm glad you kept with it and found it entertaining/likeable by the end! (At this rate, I'm starting to think I should rename this 'verse the Easter!Clark-stubborn!Lex 'verse! 'Cause, of course, this is Lex, and nothing can go right first try for him, right? ;)
I'm glad you liked the Clexing at the end -- I never know if I'm underdoing or overdoing things when I try to write stuff like that, so that makes me give a sigh of relief! :)
*hehe* Yeah, Clark is still underage at this point, too, and the barn isn't exactly the best place to go too far past kissing -- too open and exposed, not enough locks to keep prying parents and other teens out;)
No prob -- I will take any feedback whenever and whenever! :) (Though I hope my late comment isn't too bad -- I'm only really barely getting back to feeling human and catching up to my backlog now, finally ^_^;; )
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I really enjoyed the this version of Alice In Wonderland. I know that it got mixed reviews but I had a good time, so who cares? :)
Lionel poking his nose in...that man sniffs out everything!
Clark mentioning Lionel to his father headed off any objections. Very smart, Clark! ;)
Thanks again! Wonderful Movie Night story! :)
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*hee* Me, too. I didn't know it got mixed reviews, though (for shame, critics!)
*nods* Bad Lionel, no biscuit!
*g* Clark's not so dumb all the time, right?
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Then, Clark kissed Lex's forehead! I think I swooned. Even more when Clark slide his big hand to Lex's lower back.
This was wonderfully descriptive and evocative - Lex felt that odd warmth in his belly flow outwards to make his limbs feel a little heavy and slow. Tension he hadn't realized he felt just drained out of him. He slid his other hand up to cradle Clark's head and god, this felt so good. It wasn't burning passion, or anything else he was used to, but Lex was finding it absolutely addictive and he never wanted to st--It's too bad Bo Kent showed up, but just as well. Wouldn't want things getting ( ... )
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I'm glad you liked the Clexing at the end -- I never know if I'm underdoing or overdoing things when I try to write stuff like that, so that makes me give a sigh of relief! :)
*hehe* Yeah, Clark is still underage at this point, too, and the barn isn't exactly the best place to go too far past kissing -- too open and exposed, not enough locks to keep prying parents and other teens out;)
No prob -- I will take any feedback whenever and whenever! :) (Though I hope my late comment isn't too bad -- I'm only really barely getting back to feeling human and catching up to my backlog now, finally ^_^;; )
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