For Once They Had Time

[jooles34]

Title: For Once They Had Time
Fandom: Primeval
Characters: Stephen/Abby
Words: 592
Rating,Warnings: 18, breathplay
Disclaimer: Nope, don't own Primeval.
Spoilers: None
AN: I WROTE HET!!! whuffle is very persuasive. I'm still worried that it has turned my language Mills and Boony, but thanks to fredbassett for a quick turn around beta and reassurance.

Comments

[whuffle]

Congrats! That was every bit as hot as I expected it to be. Hope that the challenge of writing outside your comfort zone was rewarding. I really really liked what you did with it. Some of the imagery was incredible.

[vintagememories]

OH DEAR GOD, that was HOT, I loved every bit of it. :)

[squeezynz]

wow.....just - wow.

nope, no mills & boon discernible....just everything wonderful.

thanks for sharing.....*reads again*

[auntypam]

Incredibly HOT!!!! MY first ship was Stephen/Abby but I never felt I wrote Het well. It's funny how you can have het sex but you can't successfully write it:) But believe me if I wrote it as well as you I'd do it all the time*G*

[x_bellaitalia_x]

Stephen/Abby was my first ship, but I never read anything above a 15 - now I read this and I regret that!

Excellent! And it didn't squick me in the slightest, despite being het! Actually...it was pretty hot *g*