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evalentine99 December 12 2010, 18:59:59 UTC
loved it thank for expanding

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jooles34 December 12 2010, 20:38:20 UTC
Thank you very much for such a kind comment.

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aviv_b December 12 2010, 19:25:51 UTC
Good ending. Funny, I was thinking exactly the same thing about the door - Jack, why don't you use your key? But that wouldn't allow for the Captain Cheesecake to the rescue stunt. But I don't blame Jack for being worried.

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jooles34 December 12 2010, 20:39:28 UTC
Yeah,somehow Jack fiddling with the lock, then storming in just didn't quite work! Glad you liked it though, thank you.

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mv_girl December 12 2010, 21:30:14 UTC
Oh yes!!! That was a perfect ending to your previous parts!!! Wonderful!!!
Thanks so much!!

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chamilet December 12 2010, 22:23:07 UTC
I liked the hidden "I love you"s in there.

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missthingsplace December 12 2010, 23:18:34 UTC
Perfect ending :)

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