[fic] I Think I'd Like That

Feb 05, 2013 02:38

TITLE: I Think I'd Like That
AUTHOR: binnin
RECIPIENT: takanobaka
WORD COUNT: 2,600
GENRE: Fluff
RATING: ...pretty damned G
WARNINGS: N/A
SUMMARY: Alfred does something he's really not supposed to do, but it kind of pays off in the end, anyway.
NOTES: WOW. I am so sorry this is a couple days late. I had some issues with the beta and how they decided to rearrange ( Read more... )

pairing: us/uk, !fic, fandom: hetalia, event: usxuk 2012 secret santa, genre: fluff, rating: g

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museofepics February 5 2013, 13:17:01 UTC
I JUST LOVE EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS FIC. I love how slowly and beautifully their relationship progresses and this vignette-style just suits the story so well. The writing is clean and clear and great, Alfred and Arthur's interactions are fantastically characterized and I grinned so much at the 'super awkward' bit and the great kissing disaster. BOYS. <3

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binni February 8 2013, 06:29:21 UTC
Hahhah, thanks!! So glad I could get this reaction! I was really happy with the awkward kissing bit, myself. :)

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ren_chan146 February 5 2013, 23:09:10 UTC
Really really cute, I liked it a lot. Too bad that we don't know why Arthur became homeless but I guess it doesn't matter in the end. The pace of your story is very nice, especially for a one shot. It doesn't feel rushed even though it's short. Very well done.^^

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binni February 8 2013, 06:30:15 UTC
I contemplated reasons and whether or not to put one in. I couldn't decide fast enough, though ;w; So you can make something up if you'd like--and thanks so much for your kind words!

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binni February 8 2013, 06:32:33 UTC
No, no, your prompts weren't awkward at all!! I seriously would write a paragraph of one prompt, then say, "No, no I want to do this one!", and I did that several times with each one and asdlkfj yeah. Not awkward, more like awesome prompts!

THERE WERE SO MANY THINGS I WANTED TO USE, but in the end Doctor Who won out. :) As for the style, I used it in my other Secret Santa, so I was wary of using it here. Thankfully it worked out really well! I'm super glad you like it!

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flamel_flamingo February 7 2013, 01:56:34 UTC
*w* Awuwuwu this is so adorable!
I liked how they were getting closer little by little, and that "failed" kiss was just so cute! hehhe X3

Your style is really nice and smooth, it makes the story very enjoyable even if it is a one-shot!

Lovely fic!

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binni February 8 2013, 06:34:00 UTC
There were a lot of other scenes I imagined while writing, that went in between. Like more on the cleaning, and the furniture, and asldkf I may write small snippets of them later--

But I'm really glad you like it! Like I said, maybe I'll write some other bits and pieces later on!

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xolavander February 10 2013, 05:53:09 UTC
S-So.. cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! <3333

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