[fic] Tonight May Be Our Only Night

[binni]

Title: Tonight May Be Our Only Night
Fandom: Hetalia
Characters/Pairing: ScotlandxFrance
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance, Drama
Word Count: 5,326
Warning: N/A
Notes: I wrote this based on a birthday pic from evilapple513! It was beta'd by Gabbi! She did an awesome job! The title is based off of Eiffel 65's Una Notte E Forse Mai Più. (I'll

Comments

[lost_hitsu]

It was indeed a lucky day when you and Sires started working together, because this "marriage" of picture and word is doing real wonders.

You did an amazing job with the solemn, old atmosphere, I love the language you used for this. You know I've been waiting for this for ages and it's much much more than I expected (and I just really hope this won't be your last fic for those two)

[binni]

asldkfj Thank you for that comment--we've been doing this on-and-off for a couple years, now, I think? So we've had a ton of practice. XD

And thank you for that comment, as well! I've been waiting to post it for ages, but it's been through the wringer with edits and betas--I'm glad I waited, though! I'm pretty proud of it. c:

It will most certainly not be my last fic for them. *A*

[nekoian]

Loving this so much, use of the language really got to me. (I feel firmly put in my place but determined to improve!) And that comic spread looks...fantastic. (I'm learning to do comics so, doubly put in place.)

The characterisation of Scotland and France is really intense and slow burning. Totally different to my own headccanon and very refreshing.

I really loved Scotlands accent, I really cannot write those and it was fantastic to see one so perfectly written and still so legible! (I especially liked Scotlands England impression, I chuckled)

Nothing but compliments and I hope to see moar!

[binni]

(sldkfj Nooo don't feel 'put in place' at all! I'm 90% positive that however good this turned out was a stroke of luck, l-lmao OTL)

I didn't get to delve too deep into my headcanons for them in this one, though I hope to do so soon! I hope they'll be all right to others, as well. XD

fkslkd Thank you for your entire comment, though!! /hug It means a lot to me!

[nekoian]

I prefer to get a little overwhelmed, then I feel the need to up my game and get better afterwards. It's wonderful regardless of luck. And as long as we both agree that Scotland/France is awesome.

I think most headcanons are okay. /Disregard the incredibly bad ones I've seen on FF.net/ and I really look forward to seeing more of yours.

You're very welcome, there are so few Scotlancers out there I feel the need to show my support. /Brohug Now I'm off to write something I've been putting off.

[moonlighten]

This was really wonderfully written, with a very strong sense of time and place, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it!

I'm very glad to see from your other comments that there's more to come, too, as I'm fascinated by both your Scotland and France, and am looking forward to seeing more of their relationship.

(The picture is absolutely beautiful, as well!)