Share a favorite snippet from your current WiP

[jongibbs]

I'm having a great time polishing up the final draft of the Fur-Face sequel, Barnum's Revenge.

I need to do some invisible blending (thread in the new sub-plot so folks will (hopefully) never know it was added later), but otherwise it's looking good.

For me, one of the best things about the revision process is when you come across a scene or some

Comments

[maryjdal]

I like your snippit but uhmm...maybe tentacles? small typo I think.

[jongibbs]

Lol, it's Snowy's typo, not mine :)

[maryjdal]

That's funny. :) I was wondering -

[msstacy13]

I thought he might be quoting "Ornery the ball sack..."
:)

[bondo_ba]

I'm at work, my snippets are at home... sigh.

[jongibbs]

We'll still be later :)

[msstacy13]

The magnolia of crime...
I wouldn't have guessed that Snowy was given to floqery language...
:)

Okay, since you've asked, how can I refuse?

There were more than forty of us there, all willing to help him with just about anything. As he glanced at us, sizing us up, I guess you would say, I realized that only a few of us would be chosen. I have to admit, I would have been relieved if he’d passed me over, although the thought of simply going home after all this was beyond me. So I suppose I was lucky. He grabbed me by the shoulder. First

[msstacy13]

floqery???
flowery...

[jongibbs]

I like 'floqery' better :P

[bogwitch64]

I like floqery better too!

[jongibbs]

nice one, Irene. I could really smell that old wood and horsehair :)

[msstacy13]

I was disctracted by the bead of sweat...
:)

[starry_diadem]

Nefarious testicles just made my day. Bless you.

[jongibbs]

Glad to be of assistance :)