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Jan 10, 2005 22:37

New fic! First one from the giant ficlist from earlier. ;)

Title: 4AM Reflections (1/1)
Genre: Drama/Romance
Summary: In the wake of a disaster, Yamato is left looking back on what he now wishes he could have had with someone who was always taken for granted.
Author's Note: This is a rewrite of an old songfic of mine, entitled 4AM. It is ( Read more... )

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Gwah. ;_; anonymous January 11 2005, 12:42:51 UTC
Ee.. ;_; I just read that on FF.net and since you don't allow anonymous posting there I figured I'd have to track you down to tell you how much I loved it. It was such a nice, short and well written story that conveyed a lot of emotions in very little time. It was powerful, but not overbearing, and expressed a lot with a little. ^_^ I almost started crying. Beautifully done - I hope to see more Taito/Yamachi fics from you sometime soon.

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Re: Gwah. ;_; jonathlee January 11 2005, 14:48:04 UTC
I actually do allow anonymous reviews now (I think). I switched it last night. :) Although I'll go and check to make sure it actually worked...

Thank you! It's always nice (not to mention an ego-boost ^_~) to hear that someone is so moved by a story that they actually start to cry. :) There are no Taito stories on the drawing board right now, but... who knows what the future brings?

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Re: Gwah. ;_; jonathlee January 11 2005, 14:48:31 UTC
Er, well, almost start to cry, that is.*

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kapvik January 11 2005, 20:31:54 UTC
Aww...that was touching. I generally don't touch Digislash as a matter of preference but...aww. *sniff*

Now I want a companion piece where Agumon gets to say goodbye. My only complaint about a piece like this is that it seemed...incomplete without him there. In a world where Yamato loved Taichi, I feel both of Taichi's closest friends should be there at the end. Meh. I dunno.

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werewolf_song February 3 2005, 18:45:38 UTC
Just wanted to say you have one of the more fun-to-read bios I've run into recently. And Digimon and PR are the be-all and end-all of entertainment!

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anonymous June 27 2005, 07:54:02 UTC
Niiice! Very well-written, even if just a one-shot. Your grammar is good and everything flows very well. The biggest criticism I could possibly make is that it's a bit trite, a very much over-used plotline- aspects like the understanding girlfriend who just happens to know you're gay and doesn't really care- but with the length of the story, well, you couldn't really deviate much from that if at all. Still, the quality of the writing is really excellent, and touching. When it comes down to it, every story's cliche- it's all in the orchestration. :)

- Meian

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finnyb December 29 2005, 07:13:05 UTC
Eh, you probably don't remember me (I'm Finny, by the by), but I remember you--and the original version of this fic--from somewhere...probably somewhere involving Cynthia, now that I think of it...ages ago. Found your lj via a link Cynthia posted in her lj to the lj for the PR slash ficathon, and here I am.

I just wanted to say (after all that stuff up there explaining how and why I'm here) that I really liked the original fic, but I like this one *much* better. As you say, it is much superior--*vastly* superior, in my opinion--and I greatly enjoyed it. Of course, I enjoy many things that focus on Yamato and Taichi--particularly Yamato--but I *really* enjoyed this, and wanted to thank you for writing it. You've done a wonderful job, you really have.

*applauds*

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