Forgotten

[jonah86]

This is an experiment and it may not continue so any feedback (no matter how honest) would be greatly appreciated :)A woman swathed in a long black coat passed through the carriage hurriedly; the coat was so encompassing that you couldn’t tell if the lady had in fact any other clothes on at all. Of course this was not a new or rare sight and most

Comments

[ptcruz]

Very interesting start. Can I ask...is it 'based' on Hunger Games or such? I've not read or seen them, so am curious. :)

[partoetorno]

Well it sounds interesting ! A different present, a parallel universe .... And Jenny who still has not appeared . I think that if you have something planned about this story you can give a try! Why not ? I am curious to know what Jenny does in this different world and what is like their relationship ! What have you inspired for this story (that is a kind of no one has tried yet)?

[lazerbug2006]

Totally different and new...I say why not go with it...seems interesting to me :)