Comments | jolantru: Fiction: Fat Sausages.

jolantru

Apr 09, 2010 11:46

Ten fat sausages, sizzling on the pan,
One went pop, another went bang!
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Re: I love this jolantru April 9 2010, 04:21:46 UTC

Thank you. :)

And yes, miracles do happen!

Gp Ching says- anonymous April 9 2010, 04:20:26 UTC

Wonderful. Miracles do happen and this one came when she needed it most. I loved the song and the rhythm of this piece. Nice Work!

Re: Gp Ching says- jolantru April 9 2010, 04:22:22 UTC

Thank you! :)

The story was partly inspired by the song - I keep singing to my little girl. ;)

Pop and bang ext_230748 April 9 2010, 04:57:42 UTC

This was beautiful, delicate, heart-breaking and hopeful. I loved the voice. ~ Olivia

Re: Pop and bang jolantru April 9 2010, 05:05:23 UTC

Thank you.

Now I have a craving for sausages! Have to rummage through the freezer. ;)

ellenmillion April 9 2010, 05:04:19 UTC

*Claps hands in delight*

jolantru April 9 2010, 05:05:44 UTC

Thank you. =)

charming 2maraa April 11 2010, 17:06:53 UTC

Those sweet little fairies!
~2

Re: charming jolantru April 12 2010, 00:25:19 UTC

Thank you. :)