I liked the flashbacks and how all the clips fitted together with the song particularly when Joker interrupting Bruce’s party. Also the way you simply let the song set the scene and kept the video otherwise silent (but for the snippet at the beginning) was perfect in my opinion.
The song WOW it illustrated the story you were trying to tell brilliantly and I love the longing gist of the song. The song wording was practically perfect (not easy to do!) although the last line could do with a slight change of words however the pure emotion and longing practically makes it irrelevant as it’s so easily overlooked, I only noticed when I pulled up the lyrics.
Overall this is a winner and my only real problem is kind of obvious, its background story is too short! Any chance of turning this into a fic? *hopeful look*
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I liked the flashbacks and how all the clips fitted together with the song particularly when Joker interrupting Bruce’s party. Also the way you simply let the song set the scene and kept the video otherwise silent (but for the snippet at the beginning) was perfect in my opinion.
The song WOW it illustrated the story you were trying to tell brilliantly and I love the longing gist of the song. The song wording was practically perfect (not easy to do!) although the last line could do with a slight change of words however the pure emotion and longing practically makes it irrelevant as it’s so easily overlooked, I only noticed when I pulled up the lyrics.
Overall this is a winner and my only real problem is kind of obvious, its background story is too short! Any chance of turning this into a fic? *hopeful look*
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