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.0113 - Take My Hand, We'll Make It, I Swear

Jul 23, 2014 22:14

Jensen/Jared (past Jared/Genevieve, past Jensen/Chris)
5,580 words
Summary: Jared's pre-bachelor party. Vancouver.
Teaser: “I'm starting to think that... maybe it's not enough, you know? That... maybe there should be more.” ... "What more would you want? Heart racing and... butterflies in your stomach? The sudden urge to draw your initials on a ( Read more... )

.pairing: jensen/jared, year: 2014, universe: non-au (j²), genre: first time, length: 5k to 10k

Comments 27

hunenka July 23 2014, 20:35:26 UTC

I was just thinking about you the other day, wondering when you'd post a new fic :)

And I loved this one. The guitars, the cigarettes, the talk outside in the cold, Jared's "You love me" that wasn't a question, Chris being awesome (I'll never get enough of that fanfic trope), Jensen's reluctance to accept what Jared is offering, the hopeful ending... Yeah. I'm happy now :)

jojothecr July 28 2014, 13:01:39 UTC

Oh, you were? That's to sweet. I really suck at writing these days, I'm somehow out of ideas, out of patience to actually sit down and type, out of concentration...

Yeah, guitars, cigarettes, cold air, tattoos - my fanfic kinks. I'm glad they actually work for others, too.

I'm glad you liked it. Thank you much! :)

borgmama1of5 July 23 2014, 23:56:24 UTC

You always write angst that resolves beautifully!

jojothecr July 28 2014, 13:01:53 UTC

Thank you! :)

darklondonsky July 24 2014, 20:05:28 UTC

Your way of describing hot scenes is so decent and detailed, it works more magnetic on my reading mind than any of the open sex scenes out there. ;-)
Totally hot and full of images, senses and adoration.

Love this one. <3

jojothecr July 28 2014, 13:09:23 UTC

I don't like open sex scenes - detailed descriptions of human body and all the (dirty) details of sex? No, thanks. Especially when it's about real people. I mean, sure, real person fic is messed up in general, but when it's done in a subtle way, it's... not that bad? Detailed sex scenes seem to be very popular, though, so I'm glad you liked this ^.

Thank you much! :)

vampirebites13 July 27 2014, 21:19:25 UTC

This is Beautiful! All the way through it's just breathtaking!!!

jojothecr July 28 2014, 13:09:42 UTC

Thank you much! I'm glad you liked it. :)

alycat July 28 2014, 08:06:15 UTC

All the emotions!
So beautifully written, heartbreakingly good. Thank you for writing it

jojothecr July 28 2014, 13:10:08 UTC

Thank you for commenting. I'm happy you liked it.

Thank you! :)