.0096 - We've Been Traveling Over Rocky Ground

[jojothecr]

Dean/Sam
Survival Of The Fittest
1,837 words
Title from Bruce Springsteen
Teaser: The Impala’s finally back again, glistening in the faint light of dawn, a sleek, black beauty on the background of the ashy sky above, full and oiled and polished to perfection...

Comments

[borgmama1of5]

Lovely imagery in your writing!

[jojothecr]

Thank you.

[jojothecr]

Thank you. :)

One day I'd like to have a happy ending of a season.

[cillab42]

This is just wonderful. I can taste the coffee, feel the tiredness in Dean's bones and the resiginatikn in Sam's. Wonderful.

[jojothecr]

Thank you! :)

[saint_sentiment]

Very smooth. For the most part, the prose flowed and the emotion is effectively conveyed.

[jojothecr]

I'm glad you think so. Thank you! :)

[fangirl29]

Very vivid imagery, makes the boys' love so solid & tangible. I especially love the way you bring the Impala to life. She's the third character in the story!

[jojothecr]

She's definitely the third character in the show, she can't be forgotten.

I'm glad you liked this. Thank you! :)