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jojothecr

Black Contour

Jan 11, 2008 09:37

Title: Black Contour

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foreverbm January 11 2008, 09:27:46 UTC

That is lovely. You can describe a scene or setting very well. It's sort of a dark story but with love undertones..does that make sense.

God job!

jojothecr January 11 2008, 14:26:25 UTC

Thank you for the nice comment. And for reading even when B/J isn't 'your couple'.
I think it does make sense. Yeah, it does :-)

Thank you

minanda January 11 2008, 12:19:16 UTC

Honestly, I think this is one of your best yet. The mood of the story is so painfully beautiful as I felt the longing and the sadness of what Justin felt. Luckily, you gave me (and Justin!) some hope at the end. :D

jojothecr January 11 2008, 14:30:26 UTC

Aw, thank you!
I'm really glad that the end gave you some hope.

I didn't know this story was so sad...

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jojothecr January 11 2008, 14:33:11 UTC

Thank you.

The soundtrack is wonderful, isn't it? And Johnny's voice...Hmmm, love it!

nikki6 January 11 2008, 14:51:38 UTC

That was good.

The little twist on the "Tell me about him..." part was excellent.

Thanks for sharing.

Cheers!
Nik

jojothecr January 11 2008, 16:17:40 UTC

Thank you! & You're welcome :)

spike7451 January 11 2008, 15:38:45 UTC

A perfect little story. Sad, but heartwarming at the same time, if that makes any sense at all. LOL.

jojothecr January 11 2008, 16:18:29 UTC

I think it does make sense :)
Thank you!