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jojothecr

Do You Remember When We Danced?

Dec 19, 2007 16:21

Title: Do You Remember When We Danced?

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litlemspowerful December 19 2007, 15:54:09 UTC

I’ve been drowning in you and for the first time I wasn’t scared I’d drown.

Perfection.

I still don’t understand why you came back. I have nothing to offer to you

This is exactly what Randy was expressing when he criticized Justin for staying with Brian.

-Very nice! Can I dance in YOUR Babylon?

~LMP

jojothecr December 19 2007, 17:57:48 UTC

So, Randy didn't agree with Justin? Weird...

Of course you can, let's dance...

Thank you much for the nice comment.

kari77 December 19 2007, 21:28:18 UTC

Gosh, they were beautiful and so in love and in tune (their own tune) when they danced the cha cha. And you put that into beautiful words.

Your self-confidence has made you more beautiful, even more luscious and you were the one.
*guuuh* Absolutely.

I’ve been drowning in you and for the first time I wasn’t scared I’d drown.
*sighs* Breathtaking. My favorite line of many.

Yet you keep coming back and for some unknown, but probably good reason, I hope you’ll never stop.
He will. Always.
Perfect last sentence.

This piece made my heart speed up, in all the good ways.
Thank you. :-)

jojothecr December 20 2007, 15:16:50 UTC

Yeah, they were very beautiful... *sighs*

I'm glad you like it.
Thank you very much :-)

anwamane13 December 20 2007, 16:06:27 UTC

"I have nothing to offer to you, nothing but me - the imperfection itself."

What Brian doesn't understand is that his imperfection is the thing that makes him perfect. Why wouldn't Justin keep coming back? I would...hehehe.

Speaking of perfection, you pictured their dance perfectly. Thank you!

jojothecr December 20 2007, 18:19:41 UTC

"What Brian doesn't understand is that his imperfection is the thing that makes him perfect."
- Wow, I couldn't agree more & I'd keep coming back too...

Thank you much!

foreverfolked December 20 2007, 17:10:36 UTC

God that was beautiful. I know this may only be a one shot.. but I want more.

-Rory

jojothecr December 20 2007, 18:21:39 UTC

Thank you!

Yes, this is a one shot and although I have no idea how to continue right now... you actually never know ;) Maybe I will. One day...

_melodic_ December 20 2007, 17:48:13 UTC

Aw, I really like this! Sweet, short and cute. =)

jojothecr December 20 2007, 18:22:26 UTC

Thank you much.