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jojothecr

Nightmare

Oct 17, 2007 15:30

Title: Nightmare

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lilsarcasmqueen October 18 2007, 16:17:17 UTC

Aahhh sweet! “I’ll chase them away,” he whispers again into my ear, like a promise." *melt*
Perfect how you captured the angsty quality of Brians needs. "But I’m still frightened that one day he won’t be here to chase away the ghosts." The ending is heart breaking. Loved reading it!

jojothecr October 18 2007, 18:14:56 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed the reading :)
And thank you much for the lovely comment.

randysgirl_645 October 18 2007, 20:01:00 UTC

this was really good

jojothecr October 18 2007, 20:17:38 UTC

Thank you.

duffy_60 October 18 2007, 20:52:49 UTC

very tender and moving. Well done.

jojothecr October 18 2007, 21:22:39 UTC

Thank you much.

ladybugkay October 19 2007, 07:41:10 UTC

Beautiful and sweet. Brian is still so messed up about what happened, and I like the way Justin is able to chase the nightmares away. :)

jojothecr October 19 2007, 11:03:03 UTC

Yeah, I think that it was too tragic to forget, even for Brian.

Thank you much.