oh man, so i'm freaking out--yay Himchan for really trying to get his shit together!! Seems like a good call to try to be the best version of himself when he sees (JONGUP) his friends again after so long. WILL THE REHAB TAKE, omg i hope so.
These flashbacks tho, they're so fucking brutal!! I know the rest of That Night is going to be super hard to read. I'm also a HUGE sucker for reunions so i can't wait for the wedding.
Basically I'm loving this and it's making me feel All The Things with every update, and i can't wait for more! xo
It's crazy how much I find myself cheering for Channie after reading this chapter. And at the same time, fearing for him, too. When he started eating again, I swear I did a little cheer for him. Same when he decided to check into the rehab clinic. But I can't help but fear he might relapse, right before the wedding, too.
I really liked how the second half of the chapter went in and out of flashback. I could imagine all the visuals of it, it was really great. ^^ That's one thing I like about your writing, it's so well worded and descriptive enough that it's easy for me to see everything inside my mind. Kinda like a movie.
Also, I don't know if this sounds a little strange, but I like how the himlo stuff is so unsexy. As in, it's not in the story for smut's sake but as an actual plot point and Himchan's POV shows how much he didn't want it and how much he regrets it. It's not meant to be hot, but painful. And it just comes across so well in the storytelling. ^^
Thank you for posting this, I'll be waiting for chapter five! ^^
Thank you! Oh yeah the HimLo is supposed to make you uncomfortable. I am glad it's working. I was really worried people would be like "but what about the Himlo??!1! They're so cute together!" So I'm happy you think it's gross lol!
*sobs uncontrollably*jihoonlover85November 28 2016, 07:53:36 UTC
WHY ARE YOU SO GOOD AT MAKING ME CRY??!!! I am so so happy that Himchan is trying to get better and I hope he does it for himself too not just for everyone else cause he deserves a second chance to be happy and wow Junhong went through so much and I just want everyone to be happy ok now I'm going in my corner
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These flashbacks tho, they're so fucking brutal!! I know the rest of That Night is going to be super hard to read. I'm also a HUGE sucker for reunions so i can't wait for the wedding.
Basically I'm loving this and it's making me feel All The Things with every update, and i can't wait for more! xo
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I'm not sure I will add any more flashbacks to the night Himchan was arrested or not. I go back and forth... >.
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I really liked how the second half of the chapter went in and out of flashback. I could imagine all the visuals of it, it was really great. ^^ That's one thing I like about your writing, it's so well worded and descriptive enough that it's easy for me to see everything inside my mind. Kinda like a movie.
Also, I don't know if this sounds a little strange, but I like how the himlo stuff is so unsexy. As in, it's not in the story for smut's sake but as an actual plot point and Himchan's POV shows how much he didn't want it and how much he regrets it. It's not meant to be hot, but painful. And it just comes across so well in the storytelling. ^^
Thank you for posting this, I'll be waiting for chapter five! ^^
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Oh yeah the HimLo is supposed to make you uncomfortable. I am glad it's working. I was really worried people would be like "but what about the Himlo??!1! They're so cute together!"
So I'm happy you think it's gross lol!
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