The Reeducation of Himchan part four

Oct 09, 2014 14:52

Pairing:  ZiChan/HimUp
Rated:  PG13
Length:  4K

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yongguk, himup, jongup, daejae, youngjae, himchan, zelo, zichan, banglo, daehyun, zico

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*sighs* jihoonlover85 October 9 2014, 23:21:43 UTC
well I for one do not approve...it might be because I am still heartbroken for Zico...and pushy Daejae well mostly Youngjae irk me like you can't rush someone to fall out of love with someone gosh and I'm glad that Junhong said what he did cause it was all true *forever side eyeing Jongup with Junhong*

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Re: *sighs* jojo_kim October 12 2014, 15:56:23 UTC
I rarely write Daehyun and Youngjae in fics anymore because to be honest they annoy me the way I write them lol. I always seem to write Daehyun loud and annoying and Youngjae is bossy and a know it all. I need to work on that >_>
Junhong is an angel to Himchan in this fic I love him so much.

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Re: *sighs* jihoonlover85 October 13 2014, 00:06:45 UTC
I loveee bossy Youngjae and loud annoying Daehyun!! I don't know why though hahahaha but I love them that way so its perfect and yes Junhong is an angel

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ariellm13 October 12 2014, 14:01:38 UTC
I haven't commented in a long time but I'm still here ( ... )

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jojo_kim October 12 2014, 15:59:18 UTC
Haha I know we're supposed to defend our characters and stuff but yeah, I agree with everything you say. It's partly why I haven't worked on this a whole lot lately because I can't seem to pull Himchan out of his self pity pathetic rut. I want him to stand up for himself and be a man but he just won't and it's really hard to write a character that just doesn't seem to care about himself...

I tried hard to make him inexperienced with relationships and that's why he's so stupid and making idiotic decisions but he needs a slap upside the head. That's where Junhong comes in. Junhong doesn't give a shit. I love that.

I've already written the very last chapter and I can promise you that Himchan mans up a little by then :D

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My LJ comment drought has officially ended anonymous November 10 2014, 19:02:23 UTC
1st I'm a big fan of your work. :D ( ... )

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Re: My LJ comment drought has officially ended jojo_kim November 12 2014, 03:38:26 UTC
Thank you so much for the great comment! There's only a couple of people that I know prefer to read my stories on here versus AFF so I get all crazy excited when someone new comments :D
I'm glad that Himchan isn't coming across as completely pathetic and an asshole to you because that's the majority of the opinions I've been getting so far. I tried really hard not to make him be so pitiful. What I wanted him to be was naive and confused and too impulsive. I'm slowly attempting to break him out of the impulsiveness where he makes life-changing decisions so rashly and into a more mature and life-smart man.
At least that's what I'm hoping to show lol. For all I know most people still want to slap him OTL

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