Comments | john_teyla_fic: That Time of Night (2) for greenconverses

ruby_caspar in john_teyla_fic

That Time of Night (2) for greenconverses

Jul 09, 2008 13:06

Title: That Time of Night (Part Two)
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thingathon2008, fic

Comments 6

2bluaeryn July 10 2008, 04:31:44 UTC

Let you a comment on FF.net on this and again I have to say...WOW and I need to take a cold shower! The disagreement between J&T was right on the money as well as the makeup!

Would be nice to see an AU on the show were they could use Rachel's singing again. The rest of this would just be extra icing to that cake *G*

Thanks for sharing.

ruby_caspar July 10 2008, 10:31:17 UTC

Aw, thanks! You never know... maybe they really will go to Las Vegas for the s5 finale and Teyla will have to be a 'distraction'...

If only. :D

greenconverses July 10 2008, 19:15:25 UTC

The imagery at the beginning of the fic was just gorgeous - you really had me at the Atlantis bar and I loved the repeated "It was that time of night" throughout the first part. And the second part was hot and steamy, just how I like it. :) Thanks so much!

madjm July 13 2008, 22:03:38 UTC

I love AUs, as long as the people are kept in-character, which you've totally done here! I knew Teyla was going to be mad at John for thinking he needed to protect her. As if! Heh. I love Ronon in this, too, how he didn't bother to help them pull John away from Michael. Ha! Nice job. :)

tielan July 15 2008, 08:31:34 UTC

I loved the atmosphere in the club, Teyla's singing and John being mesmerised by it. And the argument in the room that turns to sex! Hot stuff!

Thanks for participating in it and writing this.

raksha38 August 1 2008, 09:35:25 UTC

*fans self* Woo! Hot! I always like seeing what roles people end up in when they're in AUs and I really liked all the ones you picked here. And I could totally see John's jealousy and Teyla's anger at his overprotectiveness. And also: Hot Smexxing!