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john_ispyro

TM Prompt 222 - Sleeping on the couch

Mar 19, 2008 23:59

ooc: Katie Dane used with permission from erikscordelia. ste_redeeming used with permission from, um, me. And, I just gotta say, it was a challenge for me to write Pyro in such a cute situation, but a lot of fun too. Hope he's still 'Pyro' enough. :)The daycare was out for the day, some sort of teacher's conference. John was still the bodyguard for Katie Dane, three ( Read more... )

[people] katie dane, [comm] theatrical_muse, [friends] ste jones, [work] freedom force

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ooc mutantwatch March 20 2008, 05:16:45 UTC

Oh Pyro. I think he's found his true calling. And, yes, I think he was perfectly in character :-)

Re: ooc john_ispyro March 20 2008, 05:21:49 UTC

He will never admit that. EVER. But he so has. :D And, okay, good! *wipes nervous brow* I struggle with writing him in the cute situations because, well, he's Pyro.

ooc: skids_sally March 20 2008, 05:19:51 UTC

So freaking cute!!! And oh yes, he is still John!

Re: ooc: john_ispyro March 20 2008, 05:22:59 UTC

He is SO mad at me for even daring to write anything cute and fluffy... and then POSTING it. He HATES me. So much.

But it IS so cute. HA! :D And, after all, he is here to torture for my own pleasure, right? :D

Re: ooc: skids_sally March 20 2008, 05:26:18 UTC

Hee! Silly John.

Torturing them is the best part. :P

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ooc john_ispyro March 21 2008, 06:43:36 UTC

Hahahahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa writing this MADE ME LAUGH. :D God, John's so pissed at me...

siryn_song March 20 2008, 12:23:31 UTC

That is the cutest thing I have ever read! And John was completely in character. I adore him and Katie, and him calling her Duckface, and the fact that he can understand her without her speaking is just such a perfect way of showing how close they've gotten. But still subtle enough that it's not like "I am THE nurturer, watch me nurture". Oh, John.

I think if he ever asked Terry about that threesome her head would explode. BOOM.

Favorite line: "Damn it, she got your cat." Little kids and cats are a dangerous combination. Usually for the cat. Sometimes for the kid.

john_ispyro March 21 2008, 06:46:10 UTC

Well, I'm glad to hear John was in character, because it was weird writing him in such a cute situation. But John and Katie just SLAY me. :D I'm glad you noticed the understanding he has for her, despite her not speaking, because I was trying to go with that. :D

HAHHAHAAAAAAAAA I just had to add that because it makes me LAUGH.

Thanks!

erikscordelia March 20 2008, 13:50:48 UTC

ooc john_ispyro March 21 2008, 06:48:36 UTC

Thanks! And YAY! I'm glad you liked! Especially since I borrowed your own little OC. And threw in a couple of my own. John and Katie just slay me, they're so cute! :D

Ste knows that, if he was a full time dad, he wouldn't spoil her so with the food thing and she'd be eating a lot healthier. But since he doesn't see her very much, she often gets her way with him,and spoiled rotten. Ha!