Fic: But Here Shows Much Amiss

[john_amend_all]

Title: But Here Shows Much Amiss
Author: john_elliott
Characters: Martha, Jo
Rating / Warnings: PG for implied violence
Word count: ~900
Disclaimer: "Doctor Who" belongs to the BBC.

Comments

[jjpor]

Oh my God... I don't know whether it's right to laugh at that or not, but, well, what a punchline is all I can say. ;D

[john_amend_all]

That was the kind of reaction I was hoping for :->

[everloyal]

It's difficult whether the sound that elicited was hysterical laughter or a sort of choking-to-death sobbing noise.

That was certainly a well-executed plotbunny. Both well-made and probably very well that it was executed, perhaps by stabbing violently in the soft underbelly.

[john_amend_all]

It's difficult whether the sound that elicited was hysterical laughter or a sort of choking-to-death sobbing noise.

Both are equally acceptable :-)

[primsong]

Oh...good heavens. *goggles* The weird overlay of all the angst with the cake 0_o But it has Jo (!!) and - uh, a jester's hat!

This fandom truly knows no bounds.

[john_amend_all]

It's a cake!fic, so Three is somewhere around. And while he could have brought Liz or Sarah, they wouldn't have had the right reactions at all. That left Jo.

[lost_spook]

Oh dear...! That was brilliant and amusing as an amusing thing, as I think JJ would say. :lol:

And *realises something else* ... that was my comment, wasn't it? I don't think that muse thing is staying a joke. ;-) How do we stop it? Or do I just try to use my powers for my own evil ends??

[john_amend_all]

Yes, it was your comment.

If you want to use your powers for your own evil ends, you're then faced with the challenge of working out how what you say relates to what I write :-)

[lost_spook]

Darn, there's always a catch to this conquering the universe business. Or conquering anything... :lol:

Mind you, there was nothing subtle about the Macbeth thing. Even I could work that out. ;-) So I beg nicely, right?

[john_amend_all]

Or sulk. They both seem to work.