DW Fic - Simmer Dim (18/18)

[joelywrites]

Title - Simmer Dim (18/18)
Author - joely_jo
Characters - Ten/Rose, Mickey, OCs
Rating - R (for language and adult content)
Summary - With the events of Doomsday just a distant memory, Rose Tyler and Mickey Smith make a discovery that they cannot leave alone. But what they find will take Rose on a journey she never expected. Will she come to terms with

Comments

[jai_23]

The end! Oh noes! *sniff* *sob* *bawl* That's what this story has made me do - especially this last part!

From start to finish, you truly have created such a journey for us to travel on! There were twists here and twists there, which made me love it even more. It wasn't predictable and oh, gosh your writing...*is speechless*.

I have loved this story like never before! The characterisation was spot on and wasn't like any other bog standard story where you could add any old names and get away with it. This was the Doctor and Rose - no other names could replace! :)

You are all far too good to me.

No, you're too good for us! :) But seriously, keep your fantastic work coming and I'll keep enjoying it!

Thank you so very much for the wonderful, wonderful read! :)

[principia]

Thank you, thank you, thank you for this wonderful fic.

It is interesting to see that while John Smith didn't seem to need too much thought to realize that his place was with Rose and 'their' son no matter what, that the Doctor still cannot make the adventure of 'living a life, day-to-day' his own. Is it a sense of responsibility for the universe at large? He's a stranger in a strange universe, and honestly on his own he mightn't do much more than get himself killed in fairly short order. Is it because he doesn't think he deserves it? John Smith didn't think he did either, and yet he was driven to do whatever it took to be at Rose's side. Is he just terrified of losing them, especially since Rose has so much of a 'better' (read: more prosperous) life than she did when he met her?

Any way you slice it, it is indeed better with two three.

[countrygirl_914]

I'm bad at leaving feedback, but I had to reply to the end of this beautiful story. I can only echo everyone else's comments, because this story always leaves me speechless. It's amazing, and I hope I get the chance to read much more from you.

[harpinred]

Oh, and I was doing so WELL until the last line. And then of course, I cried.
:b

I loved this, every moment of it - even though you gave me a few bad moments with Idiot|Doctor o.0

This along with our spectacular spoiler has made my month.

Thanks so much for sharing!

[meilin_miranda]

Brava, dear.