DW Fic - Simmer Dim (15/18)

[joelywrites]

Title - Simmer Dim (14/18)
Author - joely_jo
Characters - Ten/Rose, Mickey, OCs
Rating - R (for language and adult content)
Summary - With the events of Doomsday just a distant memory, Rose Tyler and Mickey Smith make a discovery that they cannot leave alone. But what they find will take Rose on a journey she never expected. Will she come to terms with

Comments

[sciosophia]

Gah! This just gets better and better. I love how grounded you make this too, how even though you developed her into a more mature character that's really quite far away from the initial Rose, I can utterly believe that it's still her. You've also made John Smith his own character, yet at the same time I know he's the Doctor.

In other words, this is immense, and with each chapter I get more and more drawn in. I'm both anticipating and dreading the end to this wonderful story!

[joelywrites]

Thank you! I'm glad you're still liking John Smith - I had thought people would have tired of him now. :) Glad you're enjoying it.

[heavenstruezest]

Hurrah! I am thankful for your fic =) Every cliffhanger you leave this on makes me more desperate to read on than the last. I love that all the pieces are coming together with the John Smith mystery - and, of course, the fact that he's come back to her. I, too, have jumped on the I'm-not-really-sure-I-want-John-to-change-back bandwagon and I'm desperate to see how they end up!

[joelywrites]

Thank YOU! Glad you're still enjoying it. :)

[imaginary_iby]

Oh yes, the Search for the Car Keys. It's nice that it's not just me. The acrobatics I have performed in search of them...

Also, I'll have you know that this is posted during the wee hours for me (time zones) but I set my alarm so that I can read it. I'm not sure if this is a case of your story being beyond fantastic or me being beyond pathetic. Probably a mix of the two.

In response to your musings about writing an aside on a rainy day, set just after John got all overprotective, I say heck yeah!

Once again, a lovely chapter.

[joelywrites]

I do exactly the same thing with the car keys! And it doesn't help that I have a huge handbag either! Glad you're enjoying it - and a little amazed at your dedication. :)

[meilin_miranda]

*groans* this is making me nuts. please post the rest, joely!

[joelywrites]

More coming soon... Promise! :)

[harwhon]

I've been checking my flist like a lunatic, hoping another chapter of this fic would show up. And now one has and you've left us with another big cliffhanger and I'll just go back to hitting the refresh-button, I fear.

You've done such an amazing job with this, you've made all of them such round characters- I especially like your Mickey. I don't think he gets enough credit most of the time, but you've done him justice.

This is such a fantastic story. I've such a soft spot for amnesia!Ten (or however you want to call it) and this is just pressing all the right buttons.

I seriously cannot wait for the next chapter. Wonderful work!

[joelywrites]

I apologise for my tardiness... I've had some friends to stay for the weekend, so I'm afraid I didn't get around to updating when I thought I would. But, there is more coming very soon! Glad you're still enjoying it. :)