DW Fic - Simmer Dim (11/18)

[joelywrites]

Title - Simmer Dim (11/18)
Author - joely_jo
Characters - Ten/Rose, Mickey, OCs
Rating - R (for language and adult content)
Summary - With the events of Doomsday just a distant memory, Rose Tyler and Mickey Smith make a discovery that they cannot leave alone. But what they find will take Rose on a journey she never expected. Will she come to terms with

Comments

[dark_aegis]

Oh, this was lovely. Like honorh said before me, this is enough to make you imagine that they have a future together as John and Rose. As always, lovely lyrical writing. And oooh, Rose has triggered something, hmm? I'm waiting on tenterhooks for the next chapter!

[joelywrites]

Thank you. And I'm really pleased that people are not hating me for my John/Rose shipping... I honestly thought people would loathe my guts, so this is a tremendous relief! :)

[imaginary_iby]

It might be silly, but at this point I sort of don't want the Doctor to return. I mean, that's not to say that he will or anything, because I don't know, but I'm enjoying John Smith so very very much that I think that reading of his confusion as he remembers things will hurt.

Of course in the end I'd be just as happy with the Doctor, but I think it's the transition that's going to be hard.

Once again, absolutely lovely.

[joelywrites]

I'm glad you're enjoying my John/Rose... I was convinced people would hate me for that! :) And thank you... :)

[dettiot]

He would tell her in the morning, he thought, that she owned his soul.

Oh, gah. This sentence is just so utterly beautiful and perfect and in-character . . . so I just have a horrible feeling that things are going to change when he wakes up.

This chapter was just gorgeous and completely perfect. And I loved the "celestial waterfall--what the hell was a celestial waterfall?" moment.

[joelywrites]

Things are about to change... and I'll leave it at that... ;) Glad you're enjoying it still!

[aibhinn]

I've not commented on the past few chapters--BAD beta!--but I do have to tell you this: you write some of the most lyrical and moving and beautiful smut around. You have a gorgeously poetic writing style, and it keeps me returning to your fics to read them over and over again.

*hugs you*

[joelywrites]

Aw, sunshine, you're just too good to me. One of these days I'll find a way to give you all this kindness back... :) Alas, though, I do not actually know David Tennant, so I cannot whisper nice things about you in his ear... ;)

[aibhinn]

Ah well--the fact that you were willing to is payment enough! *g*

....working on your birthday pressie right now, btw. ;) Michelle saw it today when she was over and thought you'd love it, so I'm hopeful!

[mandragonne]

"Ogh, guh" ?!

Ogh, guh, that's exactement what I was going to say.

And there I am, almost unhappy that John might be the Doctor, might be him again... and still, absurdly content and moved that he could be, and loving every bit of his doubts, longing, discovering...

And it is so natural that Rose would be the one to give him back to himself...

(To quote Jack, again)
I keep wondering : if John Smith is the Doctor, is there a watch ? a compass, maybe - or another way to become human is envisageable.
And you're not going to answer before, er, seven chapters.
Like the seven sins.
Like "seven days in a week"
Seven ways to kill a reader, anyway.

Come ooon... a lil spoiler and I cook crêpes Suzette for you !

[joelywrites]

A little spoiler... hmmmm... How's this? Someone will go, someone will return, someone will do something unexpected and someone will have decisions to make. ;)