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joans23

Comment Fic!

Jan 04, 2009 13:06

I've wanted to do this for so long, but never could gather the courage. So I promised myself to do it during the holiday, and since I'm going back to work tomorrow, it's now or never.
Plus, brin-bailey says it works to cheer yourself up ( Read more... )

fiction, comment fic

Comments 35

kelleigh January 4 2009, 16:38:24 UTC

My brain is saying PICK J2! But....Michael Wiseman/any boy - He's sick of being perfect. =)

joans23 January 4 2009, 17:44:19 UTC

Oh God, I've never written him, but for you, I'll give it a try. <3

He’s been sitting in the dark for two days when Dr. Morris comes to check on him. The sun comes up and the sun goes down, but he refuses to open his eyes, so it stays blissfully dark.

“What are you doing, Mr. Wiseman?”

“Nothing, Doc. Nothing at all. Just … leave me alone.”

Michael doesn’t know who’s more surprised, he or the good doctor, when he actually turns around and does exactly that.

It’s not that Michael has anything … much … against the Doc, it’s just. He doesn’t know how to explain what’s wrong. Or what he needs to fix it.

Thing is, he can’t stand looking at his body anymore. At all. He tightens his fingers around the chair’s arms and he can just imagine what it must look like, the unblemished skin stretching whitely around perfectly designed round knuckles and he wants to throw up.

The face in the mirror, the body under his clothes, none of it is his. None of it has the marks and scars and proof of his old life, of the real Michael Wiseman anymore. ( ... )

kelleigh January 4 2009, 18:15:39 UTC

I've never written him either, but there's no time like the present!

And that was GREAT! I loved this:

None of it has the marks and scars and proof of his old life, of the real Michael Wiseman anymore. He can’t even jerk off, the perfect hard line of his cock under his hand is not his. What felt good before doesn’t seem to work anymore and it all feels so wrong somehow.

Just to think about his situation, how weird it is...Glad you gave it a try for me. I'll let you pick something REALLY weird if I ever do comment prompts =)

joans23 January 4 2009, 18:54:49 UTC

Hee, I'm glad you liked! It really was kinda fun!
And I'll remember that and try to think up something delicious if you ever do them. :D

PS. I'm LOVING all your Danny/Martin icons! LOVE!!

englishblue January 4 2009, 17:55:25 UTC

Hmmm. Okay. Sam/Dean. The carnival's in town. Ferris wheels, fortune telling booths, a bearded lady and sticky, sticky cotton candy that gets everywhere. All are optional except, yeah, cotton candy. C:

joans23 January 4 2009, 18:49:42 UTC

Damn, you made me think hard, woman! I love it! <3 ( ... )

englishblue January 5 2009, 01:09:57 UTC

Squeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!! I love it. My Sunday ends on a happy note with visions of naked Sam and Dean's long, long tongue. I am your slave!

joans23 January 5 2009, 07:57:15 UTC

I have a slave! SO awesome! Nrgh, Dean's tongue FTW \o/!

merihn January 8 2009, 10:02:21 UTC

Tee hee, even though I just found that little snippet of AWESOMENESS for my bday... I'd love something more! (and now I wish I'd posted your ficlet already, even more)

If you think you could manage Merlin/Arthur... sword fighting that leads to something Arthur wasn't prepared for.

If not: Sam/Dean, S1, Sam having a nightmare.

♥