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Nov 23, 2011 12:31


Bite me!
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sims 2, mobacy, nic

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holleyb76 November 23 2011, 05:11:26 UTC
What a pleasure to see a whole chapter of NIC!!!
I was so happy to see this after months and months of convoabout this. I really liked the new writing style, you did such an awesome job. the pictures were really good too!
Did I mention how nice it was too see so much of Nicoli? ;)
Look it's my Simself! Even though I love Nicoli so, I guess it was the right thing to do to help him keep his three bolt love. *Sigh*
Now I look forward to Nicoli babies!!!

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joandsarah November 23 2011, 21:27:49 UTC
I knew you would like a whole chapter, kind of why I did this. :)

Glad you liked the writing, I won't be doing a whole lot like this because it kicks monkey butt getting it done! Not the writing so much, but the staged shots that go with it.

I only decided halfway through that Fergus and Marcy should really be simselves in disguise. :) If I’d planned it better I would have actually used your simselves and given them a disguising makeover.
I knew Sawyer should be Fergus, but I didn't know who to pick for Marcy until I looked over the list of names. Then I thought your simself would be just right since you’re the romance Queen and I know you would want him to be happy. :) -Even if it wasn't with your simself. Wrong aspiration etc. But yes there will be Nicoli babies... maybe one of those will be smok'en too. ^_^

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the_chemic November 24 2011, 04:07:20 UTC
Ohhhh! A whole interlude on Nic!!! ^.^

I really love the writing style you have going. It's different, yet no less awesome. The part about Nic flying around as a bat and smacking into the wine rack just had me laughing at imagining that scenario. And ohhhh, can't wait to see Nic's kids!

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joandsarah November 24 2011, 06:41:52 UTC
I thought he deserved one. ^_^

Thanks. :) I was going for a more serious tone this time, not that I can help myself adding in a little humour. ;)

Me either! I'm playing all the spares houses up to spring right now.

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pinkthistles November 27 2011, 03:55:33 UTC
Hey, this was so good! Loved your writing style (sly tongue-in-cheek = funny) and the posing was terrific..you should make more of these :D

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joandsarah November 27 2011, 04:42:02 UTC
Thanks Pink. :D It's been eleven months since I updated my legacy, and this interlude was more heavily staged and slightly more serious then what I normally do-although from yours and other comments my tongue in cheek humour must still be coming across even though I attempted to be different this time! Lol.

If you're interested, early chapters are on the exchange-although they may be painful to read. :P

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jillyson November 28 2011, 19:09:44 UTC
I don't deserve any credit for this awesomeness! What did I see, maybe four pages tops? I loved that he and Vicky are together again, and the simselves - too funny! I'm glad Trent got his in the end! Rotten Bully! I loved your "different style" and this was almost a story all on it's own! Great descriptions, great dialog - and great twist at the end! Bravo!

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joandsarah November 28 2011, 22:13:01 UTC
I'm sure I sent you more than that, and the water dripping and the rats scratching were from your input when I had writers block, so a credit it is! :D

By the time I got to filming the diner scene I thought it would have been unlikely if left to chance for them to met up, so decided it would be better as an underhanded set-up. Who better to pull that off but the simselves. ^_^

Thanks Jily. :D

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