Robotech fic - Maelström

[jo_anderson_rt]

Maelström Chapter 6

Disclaimer: I don’t own Robotech or any of it’s characters. This fic was written for entertainment purposes only. No infringement is intended.

Author’s note: This is a Roy and Lisa fanfic, you are warned. If you don’t want to read this please don’t. I wrote this because I have always think that Roy is an awesome character and

Comments

[gppr]

Very good, as usual, Jo. You're really humanizing Roy for me. :) I really can't wait to see how you develop the relationship. It'd be fun to see Lisa getting both Rick's and Roy's attention and the tension that would ensue between the pilots... *evil grin* /

Anyway, very cool.

[jo_anderson_rt]

You're really humanizing Roy for me.
yay! I'm glad I'm doing that, I feel like I destroyed Roy in the first chapters and now I'm building him back again.

It'd be fun to see Lisa getting both Rick's and Roy's attention and the tension that would ensue between the pilots... *evil grin* /
I know!! I can't wait to write that, poor poor rick *evil grin*

[kkm7806]

Wonderful! I liked how you are establishing a bond between Roy and Lisa in this chapter. These two are good for each other. I can't wait to see how they will get together. I hope you get the next chapter out soon. I can't wait to read it.

[jo_anderson_rt]

I liked how you are establishing a bond between Roy and Lisa in this chapter. These two are good for each other.
thank you so much! and I'm so glad I'm not the only one who thinks they are good for each other ;)

And the bond will get stronger and stronger as the chapters continue

[agent_cavendish]

Hey there!

You know I'm not good reviewing, 'cause I give you my opinions the second after I read the chapter or in the middle of it, hehehe... but since I'm so awesome and you're my fav I'll write you something ;D (and that was me being humble)

Under that flying suit, Roy is such a teddy! The way you described him changing from a Womanizer to Teddy!Roy was marvellous, the same goes for Lisa (well, she's not a womanizer [as far as I know] nor a maneater {yes, I'm using songs}), but her transformation from a young girl in love to the Ice Queen we all love...

I don't know what else to write (it's 8.46 am on a cloudy Wed morning and I'm still sleepy and coffee doesn't help! and I have a test in less that an hour, yay)... if I remember anything else, I'll put in on another post, right?

Cheerio!
xoxo, -F

PS: Again, THANK YOU for my Phantom of the Opera icon... it's so cute! *O*

[jo_anderson_rt]

Under that flying suit, Roy is such a teddy!
isn't he! all I want to do is cuddle him, even when he is a jerk :P

and I'm so glad you like your phantom icons ;) Gerard is the best

[agent_cavendish]

He's our Teddy Jerk ^^
Can we call him like that from now on? please? *whistles*

And I ADORE G's idea!! I can't wait to see what your evil mind is going to plot... is it my idea or drama's in tha house? *add Snoop Dogg's accent and raper talking*