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Just Like A Jones 36/40

Dec 30, 2009 23:59

Just Like A Jones
Chapter: 36
Rating: NC-17 for series
Pairing/Characters: Jack/Ianto. Mica. David. Martha. Gwen/Rhys. Lois. Johnny/Rhiannon.
Synopsis: Mica may be a Davies, but sometimes she acts like a Jones. Set 13 years in the future. The world is a very different place, and Torchwood is a world that Jack doesn't want to know, but a promise made ( Read more... )

just like a jones

Comments 18

madbottoms December 31 2009, 00:56:42 UTC

Another great chapter. It's great seeing Jack and Ianto together. It will be interesting to see how Rhiannon reacts when she finds out about Ianto.

jo19844_twfic December 31 2009, 01:09:31 UTC

Thankoooo

Just gotta crack on with writing it noiw lol

yantoharkness December 31 2009, 01:07:45 UTC

let again great job can't wait to see wht happens next

jo19844_twfic December 31 2009, 01:10:04 UTC

thanks :D

i know what happens next -- probably a good thing seen as im the writer lol

firefly124 December 31 2009, 02:15:47 UTC

The Rhiannon and Andy conversation is spot on for both of them. Love Rhi telling Andy she can tell a cop's lying 'cause their lips are moving. *g* Though I do feel awful that Gwen went and got her so anxious. I cannot wait to see how this conversation with Mica goes!

And Jack and Ianto's lovely lazy day is, of course, made of awesome.

jo19844_twfic December 31 2009, 02:40:52 UTC

and your comments are, of course, amde of awesome too

(see what i did therE???)

firefly124 December 31 2009, 02:49:50 UTC

LOL! Yup!

jo19844_twfic December 31 2009, 02:57:29 UTC

Not just a pretty face and nice rack. I has brainz too

laeliacatt December 31 2009, 02:36:01 UTC

Mica to the rescue! At least, that's probably what Andy's thinking. :) Poor Rhiannon is sliding backwards. Her anxiety attacks are getting bad. I hope she can cope with Ianto's return. Good thing Andy was so gentle with her. I liked their dynamic here. And I liked the way you showed her uneasiness by the way she noticed every minute detail in the room.

I loved the little domestic scene between Gwen and Rhys: “you hold me together.” Sweet. You captured how they fit together.

And of course, I loved the slow and easy way Ianto and Jack were with each other, of how Jack was able to appreciate Ianto again, and appreciate Ianto's...talents. ;)

jo19844_twfic December 31 2009, 02:39:58 UTC

mental health workers baby, we have insight.

remuslives23 December 31 2009, 05:00:54 UTC

Loved the different POV's in this chapter. Jack and Ianto moments were so sweet, but I was hoping we'd get to see Ianto's letter to Gwen. *pouts* Rhi is slowly coming apart, and hopefully Mica's news won't push her over the edge. And Rhys, you put up with too much shite, sweetheart!

Lovely chapter. I'm looking forward to more.

Just Like A Jones 36/40 jo19844_twfic December 31 2009, 08:30:57 UTC

wekk as for the letter, thee day isnt over is it and i guess im gonna write this fic off as a failure with gwen and rhys :(

Re: Just Like A Jones 36/40 remuslives23 December 31 2009, 09:09:48 UTC

Actually, I think you've got their relationship down perfectly. Rhys takes far too much crap from that woman in the series, so you've done a great job bringing that same long-suffering feeling to him here. :)