Cryptic Coffee 3/4

Oct 31, 2007 01:18

TITLE: Cryptic Coffee. 3/4
RATING: PG13
SYNOPSIS: Jack is one cheap date, and easily seduced; Ianto is a tease with things to get off his chest. Maybe a bar isn't the best place to meet, but then again maybe it's the best place of all.(Episode 3, missing scene fic)

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reefgirluk October 31 2007, 08:46:28 UTC
Mmmm this is very nice

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jo02 October 31 2007, 08:51:17 UTC
This is a long, sweet, slow seduction . . . I don't mind how long you spin it out for.

Big sigh

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jo19844_twfic October 31 2007, 09:09:42 UTC
I SWEAR paty 4 is the last installment lol then ill do ep4 loli. jus my computer wont stop eating it :( ve rewritten it so many times so its bak to old fashioned en and paper and typ it in lol. lus, the boys missbehave in my head lol

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jo02 October 31 2007, 11:00:04 UTC
Stop those boys miss-behaving in your head woman, and get them miss-behaving on my computer screen.

I'm loving the way you have Ianto teasing him with just the right amount of indecision, and drawing it out without making me feel at all frustrated. Great writing.

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lurker1860 October 31 2007, 09:27:05 UTC
WOW. This is such a nice way to start the working day *sigh*

It took a couple of attempts to find out who Miss Jones was.... my cat decided it was fuss time and stood in front of the monitor (she is now on my mouse mat :S )

I fully agree with jo02 - spin it out for as long as you want. I am loving reading these.

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jo19844_twfic October 31 2007, 10:50:37 UTC
lol u couldnt find out who miss jones was cos ur cat was on obstructing you... thats just ironic! lol

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grlindirtyshirt October 31 2007, 19:19:57 UTC
Loving this series, it's very fun and fills in the gaps nicely.

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ally_p_x October 31 2007, 22:23:59 UTC
I'm really enjoying this series. I've read all your work and this series is amongst the best.

“So you expected me to live in an Ikea catalogue?”

This line made me laugh - I can just imagine him saying that!

More soon, please?

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