Fic Update: "Transformations," Chapter 9: Reunion

[jncar]

Title: Transformations, chapter 9
Characters/Pairings: Remus, Tonks, Sirius, Andromeda, Bill, Remus/Tonks, some Bill/Fleur.
Rating/Warnings: PG-13, swearing, mild sexuality
Summary: After months of friendship, Remus and Tonks have begun a romance. After years of isolation Sirius is surrounded by friends and family. After years of estrangement,

Comments

[pinkhairedauror]

Beautiful! I really love the way you're bringing out how special Remus and Tonks really ARE. I love the bonding between Andromeda and Tonks (hahaha and there's still a glitch coming in at high velocity); and the idea of Ted knowing he might need to referee just made me laugh out loud.

I am really enjoying this; thank you so much for writing it and sharing, and I am looking forward to the next part - I hope it's easy writing!

[jncar]

Thanks so much!

I've never written a grown mother/daughter relationship before, so it's been fun for me working on it. I'm glad you're enjoying it. :)

[shimotsuki]

I really love the slightly expanded version of the mother-daughter talk -- ick, your Lucius is just (fascinatingly) horrible.

This line really struck me, too: Remus paused, uncertain if this story was really as applicable as he had hoped.
Heh. Poor Remus, painting himself into a corner. I like the way you've shown him as willing to help but unsure quite how -- after all, this may be the first time he's really even talked with another werewolf, let alone one who's newly afflicted.

Even though neither one of Tonks's two visits pays off, the contrast between the Bulstrode and Prewett households is really striking -- I like this glimpse into different corners of wizarding society.

(Also, rereading this made me think of something else about Ch 10, so I'll send an e-mail tonight after supper!)

[jncar]

Thanks for the re-read and review. It's nice to know you like it enough to come back for a second helping. :)

And kudos to you for pointing out the areas that needed a little work--I'm glad you like what I did with them.