Redemption, Chp. 10

Jan 14, 2011 12:01

Chapter 10

Richard came awake with a pleasing warmth tingling his skin.  It washed over him, lulling him to a place of peace and contentment.  He moved a little, trying to orient himself.  “Be still, my love,” he heard Kahlan whisper and she pressed a gentle kiss to his brow.  He couldn’t move even if he wanted to, his body hurt everywhere.  ( Read more... )

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foreverrk January 14 2011, 17:37:44 UTC
Omg YAY Richard is alright and safe! that
Shota is a mean old lady lol..trying to
erase R memory

“I would rather suffer the pain of losing
Ethan than never remember having held him.
I would rather bear the agony of his death
than never know the sweet smell of his skin. And I would choose to suffer all of my days
than to be oblivious to Kahlan’s touch…her smile, her spirit.I would never let you take
that away from me.”

Ah just when you think you couldn't love
Richard any more you find something more
to love hee hee..

“When was she here?”

how Sweet of K leaving her favorite Flowers
for her son i soo love it how Richard knew
right away it was K who did it

hopefully R/K will talk finally to one
another again..Awsome job as always Jlyn
Sooo Can't wait to see More ;)

Richie Icon for R chapter LOL

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foreverrk January 14 2011, 17:39:33 UTC
OMG Hey Loook i am 1st whoa i've been trying
to be First in LotsLove Fics but still no Luck
haha..Glad i was able to be in at least
another of my Favorite Writers =)

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jlyncss January 14 2011, 23:32:12 UTC

Hahaha, right?! I'm always trying to get first in people's fics. I only made it once I think. Woo hoo for stalkers!! :)

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jlyncss January 14 2011, 23:27:46 UTC

Shota is bad news!! Good thing R set her straight! heehee

Awww...he is the sweetest isn't he? ;)

Thanks ruthy, glad you're enjoying it. Love your icon choice!

Now that R is home he's sure to be running into K. :) :)

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collinsamnell January 14 2011, 20:45:54 UTC
GAH AMAZING!!!

“I would rather suffer the pain of losing Ethan than never remember having held him. I would rather bear the agony of his death than never know the sweet smell of his skin. And I would choose to suffer all of my days than to be oblivious to Kahlan’s touch…her smile, her spirit.” His voice broke with the last of his words, it had been so long since he’d last seen her smile. Still, he wouldn’t trade their life together to ease his pain. Not for anything. “I would never let you take that away from me.”

LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS PART! OMG I LOVED IT ALL! and theres the promise of good times to come now that he is home!!!
FANTASTIC WRITING <33333

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jlyncss January 14 2011, 23:37:06 UTC

I'm so glad you loved it! Yep, R is home -- things are definitely looking up for our favorite couple!! :)

Thanks so much! <333

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confessorlove January 14 2011, 22:34:19 UTC
OMG SHOTA GTFO!! I mean thank you for saving Richard :\ Just stop being mean and trying to erase Richard's memories.

I would rather suffer the pain of losing Ethan than never remember having held him. I would rather bear the agony of his death than never know the sweet smell of his skin. And I would choose to suffer all of my days than to be oblivious to Kahlan’s touch…her smile, her spirit.” His voice broke with the last of his words, it had been so long since he’d last seen her smile. Still, he wouldn’t trade their life together to ease his pain. Not for anything. “I would never let you take that away from me.”

It's already been quoted TWICE but it is just that awesome. I just love this part!!

Kahlan leaving her favorite flowers for Ethan was just so sweet and I loved that Richard knew right away that Kahlan had been there and done it.

I'm just so excited they are finally going to get to heal and TALK TO EACH OTHER!!

AMAZING CHAPTER <33333

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jlyncss January 14 2011, 23:46:12 UTC

Hahaha!!! Yes, thank you Shota but PLZ GTFO nao!!

Wow, another quote...you girls really liked that part!! (I did too, hee).

R knew his K had been there....he is so smart like that!! <333

YES!!!! It is time they TALK...or KISS!!! or... oh, well...stay tuned... ;)

Thanks bb for commenting!! <3333

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jlyncss January 14 2011, 23:51:58 UTC

Poor R...thinking he was with K and it turns out to be Shota!! :p

I'm so glad you liked this chapter and especially that same Richard quote. R is SO sweet! :)

He is back where K is now...I expect they'll be healing each other soon. :)

Thanks for commenting!! <333

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lotslovercss January 15 2011, 03:42:52 UTC
Awwww, I loved that last part!! Cara was close enough to keep an eye on Kahlan, but let her do it herself.

And Richard knows that Kahlan was up there now!

I HATE SHOTA!!!!!!!!!!!! :(

Now, get R+K together so they can heal and get making more bb's!!!

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jlyncss January 15 2011, 17:34:12 UTC

R is back in Aydindril so I expect things to be heating up a little. Yeah...just a little. :)

Thanks for commenting bb!!

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