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How Things Began (14/23)

Feb 01, 2010 05:08

Title: How Things Began (14/23)
Rating: M
Author: jlrpuck
Pairing: Ruby Quarles, Elias McCoy
Disclaimer: The characters contained in this story are the products of my imagination; as such, I retain all right to and ownership of them.
Summary: Welcome to the story of how Elias McCoy and Ruby Quarles met, and grew to became the characters we know.
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how things began, elias mccoy, ruby

Comments 70

catyuy February 1 2010, 10:37:12 UTC

Loved it

jlrpuck_fic February 1 2010, 15:50:44 UTC

*hugs* Yay!

editrx February 1 2010, 11:54:14 UTC

Oh, I am always so happy to see a new chapter of this in my early morning LJ reading! Watching their relationship develop, especially watching Elias's growing love for Ruby show in so many subtle ways, is simply lovely.

And ... it's about time they shagged!

jlrpuck_fic February 1 2010, 15:53:24 UTC

Oh, I am always so happy to see a new chapter of this in my early morning LJ reading!

It's nice to know I'm not the only soul up and about that early in the morning (Eastern Time *g*)

And ... it's about time they shagged!

I know! They were most vexing about the whole thing.

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jlrpuck_fic February 1 2010, 15:54:03 UTC

As part of a well balanced breakfast it's a great way to start the day.

*nods* It's part of the food pyramid, doncha know.

;)

earlgreytea68 February 1 2010, 12:34:09 UTC

I love how long it takes them to get to this point. It's perfectly timed.

meralee82 February 1 2010, 15:00:17 UTC

You and I have very different definitions of the words "perfectly timed".

jlrpuck_fic February 1 2010, 15:55:20 UTC

She also had the advantage of reading this whole thing in one fell swoop ;)

meralee82 February 1 2010, 16:32:27 UTC

There is that...

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beatlejessie February 1 2010, 13:24:01 UTC

GUUUUUUUH

What a lovely, lovely way to start a Monday morning! Gorgeous as always, I adore how attuned to each other they already are, and how comfortable.

And this line just summed up the GUH for me:

She was still gasping for breath when he pulled back, his gaze darkly satisfied;

mmmmmmmmmm!!!

jlrpuck_fic February 1 2010, 15:56:46 UTC

Gorgeous as always, I adore how attuned to each other they already are, and how comfortable.

I'm not sure I want to know what it says about my Issues, but it was kind of *weird* to write a smut scene with two people who were so completely comfortable with each other their first time shagging.

And this line just summed up the GUH for me:

There are a few lines in this story which I think perfectly summarize Elias and who he is. That is one of them.