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A Near Thing, 3/4

Jan 19, 2009 00:01

Title- A Near Thing (3/4)
Author- jlrpuck
Rating - M
Pairing - Peter Carlisle/Rose Tyler
Disclaimer - Characters from Blackpool and Doctor Who are the property of the BBC, and are used with the greatest of love and respect; no profit is intended from the writing or sharing of this story.
Summary - Rose’s job is dangerous-but so is Peter’s.
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carlisle, year 9, rose

Comments 73

tardisblue January 19 2009, 05:25:36 UTC

*sighs happily*
The lovemaking was beautiful. I loved the bit where Peter told Rose to look at him. Such a wonderful reunion for Peter and Rose. I could practically feel the "wait" the two of them had to endure.

jlrpuck_fic January 19 2009, 15:24:26 UTC

I'm really glad you enjoyed this. This chapter, actually, was originally the *entirety* of the story--just ten pages, all focusing on the aftermath.

xebgoc January 19 2009, 05:35:10 UTC

oh, i do love holidays when i can stay up late (though i'm usually up this late anyway... but it means that *you* were up late and I benefited :)

This was gorgeous... the way they are together in every day life, although this is far from ordinary, it is life... recuperating from an illness is something we all have to go through at some point and so it makes it real for us... and the tendency to try to do too much too soon.

Peter is so lucky to have Rose there for him, in the same way that we know that he is there for her when Lucy is born (note to self... it's time to reread that... it's been far too long).

It's SO Rose to go behind Pete's back... and get caught doing it. And good on Pete for holding her accountable... getting Torchwood involved when they weren't asked could jeopardize the case against Nonnie when they find him because god only knows what Jake and Mickey would have done to him if they'd caught him first.

is the younger brother Michael or Matthew ?the image I have of Peter in the shower... oh my... and he's ( ... )

jlrpuck_fic January 19 2009, 15:45:17 UTC

oh, i do love holidays when i can stay up late (though i'm usually up this late anyway... but it means that *you* were up late and I benefited :)

*g* Ah, long weekends-I do love them so.

This was gorgeous... the way they are together in every day life, although this is far from ordinary, it is life... recuperating from an illness is something we all have to go through at some point and so it makes it real for us... and the tendency to try to do too much too soon.

Peter’s a stubborn bastard, as we all know-and being incapacitated, in any way for any length of time, is the worst kind of torture for him. Poor Rose absolutely has her hands full trying to keep him from overdoing it.

Peter is so lucky to have Rose there for him, in the same way that we know that he is there for her when Lucy is born (note to self... it's time to reread that... it's been far too long).

They might squabble, and even occasionally properly fight-but they love each other dearly, and will always be there for each other.

good on Pete for holding her ( ... )

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jlrpuck_fic January 19 2009, 21:47:54 UTC

A word I always associate with Mister Collins...randomly.

roxyk630 January 19 2009, 05:36:46 UTC

Awwwwwwwwwwww... man, now what am I going to read at WORK tomorrow?

;)

Gorgeous as usual. <3 It's amazing what intimacy can do for any ill.

jlrpuck_fic January 19 2009, 15:47:17 UTC

Stupid work, interfering with fanfic ;)

I think re-establishing intimacy with Rose is key to Peter's continued recovery--it's a sign that his life is slowly returning to normal, and that all will be well.

frakup January 19 2009, 06:13:07 UTC

I love how Rose knows Peter's going to be ok when he starts getting snippy. And it was a month(!) before they could be together? No wonder he was crabby. It's nice to see things getting back to normal. I hope we get to see them nab the shooter.

jlrpuck_fic January 19 2009, 15:48:52 UTC

I love how Rose knows Peter's going to be ok when he starts getting snippy.

The ever-reliable Carlisle barometer ;)

And it was a month(!) before they could be together? No wonder he was crabby.

Poor Peter had to do completely without for a month. I suspect it had been a few days before he was shot--and then, of course, there's the 3+ weeks after he got shot. Poor guy.

angelfireeast January 19 2009, 07:31:10 UTC

That was wonderful!!! Poor Peter so worked up and wanting Rose but not being able to phyically do what he wants. And Rose just being as worked up as he is but afraid of hurting him. I feel like there is male pride at work on Peter's part in this story as well as just plain love and want of Rose.

jlrpuck_fic January 19 2009, 15:50:28 UTC

I feel like there is male pride at work on Peter's part in this story as well as just plain love and want of Rose.

There is a *huge* helping of male pride at work here, without a doubt. But yes, he also craves Rose something fierce.

Happy Birthday!