A Near Thing (2/4)

Jan 15, 2009 05:18

Title- A Near Thing (2/4)
Author- jlrpuck
Rating - T
Pairing - Peter Carlisle/Rose Tyler
Disclaimer - Characters from Blackpool and Doctor Who are the property of the BBC, and are used with the greatest of love and respect; no profit is intended from the writing or sharing of this story.
Summary - Rose’s job is dangerous-but so is Peter’s.
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carlisle, year 9, rose

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apurplepatch January 15 2009, 10:38:50 UTC
Utterly perfect.

Loved it - especially where Rose burst out laughing to have her Peter back - pure brilliance.

Can't wait for the next two chapters.

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jlrpuck_fic January 15 2009, 13:19:35 UTC
Thank you :)

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jlrpuck_fic January 15 2009, 13:20:25 UTC
Peter has issues with his patience on a *good* day; to be laid up in bed for days, aching and not able to take care of himself, makes being civil a challenge. ;)

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lostwolfchats January 15 2009, 11:18:44 UTC
phewww!

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jlrpuck_fic January 15 2009, 13:20:35 UTC
*g*

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lostwolfchats January 15 2009, 13:36:47 UTC
I just had to keep reminding myself that the fic you wrote for me is after this... but STRESS!! I actually nibbled on a nail!

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jlrpuck_fic January 15 2009, 16:42:17 UTC
*hugs* It'll be fine! Honest!

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tripocket January 15 2009, 11:49:42 UTC
You know, I was waiting for that dagger sharp tongue and the longer it took the more worried I got. Then when it hit I was all, 'you git, how dare you get yourself shot and then yell at her!' Obviously I need to broaden the line between real people and fictional people in my wee messed up head.

The question for me now is how is this going to hit Rose. Sure she's fine right now but I have to believe she's holding together white knuckle style.

Does it make me a mushy goober that my favorite part is the fact that Rose laughing at him is what brought him out of it?

(hmm second read and I notice "unless they bought it for the twins" Squeeee McCoy twins.

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jlrpuck_fic January 15 2009, 13:22:09 UTC
Peter's tongue (metaphorically, not literally)--the only true barometer for Peter Carlisle's health. *g*

Does it make me a mushy goober that my favorite part is the fact that Rose laughing at him is what brought him out of it?

I don't think so ;)

hmm second read and I notice "unless they bought it for the twins" Squeeee McCoy twins.

Twins indeed--Ruby and Elias have three children, when all is said and done.

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amberfocus January 15 2009, 11:50:51 UTC
It's nice to see him back to his old self again. Every once in a while when I'm reading a chapter from you I actually forget that I'm reading it. Instead I'm simply experiencing it. This was one of those chapters. And as always, a pleasure to experience.

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jlrpuck_fic January 15 2009, 13:22:37 UTC
*blushes* I'm very flattered by your comment.

Thank you.

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